Very touching poem! I could not imagine how one would deal with such a loss but the emotions I get from the father were raw and strong. almost as if I was that father myself. I love how easy you made it for a reader to connect with the emotions in this even if one has not experienced it themselves.
That was beautiful. Makes me miss elder loved ones of my own. This is very touching. The feelings very strong here. It brought tears to my eyes. Please continue to write and be open with the way you feel.
I love seeing the view of the master. New to bdsm lifestyle *myself* and always curious about the thoughts in others heads. Such loving pain, Very well done!
I love this! So very raw and open. This would be beautiful posted on a framed print. If only it was easy for everyone to open their eyes and accept others for who they are. We should not have to change to be loved. But to be loved ror who we already are. That is the key. Please continue to write more. Very inspirational piece.
I actually really love this. As twisted as it may be. But maybe that is why? I love how you get to know the mother's thoughts even if it be brief. So dark.
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