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Review of Coloring  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well hello there spidey! I clicked "Read & Review"; so glad I did, for this little gem popped up. Not usually a fan of free style but this was well done and engaging. Enjoyed it beginning to end. Made me think of times my mom or dad would do things together. It is amazing but sometimes the simplest things such as coloring help create the most enduring and endearing memories. Thanks for inviting me on a trip down your memoryland and inspiring one of my own. FANTASTIC job

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Review of Soulmates  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
hello there Thankful Sonali LOVES WDC!. The expanse of creativity on this site never ceases to amaze me. What a great question. Had me thinking from the beginning. Than after I read the "points to think about I thought a bit more then added my 2 cents to the list. Please notify me when the letter comes out okay.

Sisco's Good Deed Group

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Review of A Dis-Ash-ter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Harry. Oh if only there was a way I could fan you twice I most assuredly would.After reading the storoem I think it is an excellent choice.Wow I was taking this serious than the funny twist.Great last line heck great storoem. Have a great Thanksgiving!

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello there Corrine. Wishing you and yours a great Thanksgiving. Title is attention getting. Didn't really care for the summary. Did you base the color choice on skin color? Three colors each with opposing meaning, and describes history in it conflicting terms which you well state. Simple yet powerful if one takes time to think and let it soak in a bit. Overall good but not quite a 4.

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Review of Complex Numbers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello there Rake the Waltz. Wishing you a wonderful Thanksgiving. Your last entry about imaginary numbers reinforced my disdain for high math lol. As I scrolled down I found the video about imaginary numbers. Although funny still not a fan of higher math. At the end of the video there was a link to a video about Thanksgiving math. Funny stuff as is your approach to your blog. Thanks for posting

Sisco's Good Deed Group

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Jay O'Toole and may you and yours have a peaceful and blessed Thanksgiving.What a fantastic blf. I agree the world still walks in darkness and needs the Light.I have read some of your work and have been so overwhelmed that I had forgotten to fan you. Let me take care of that lol

Christian Bible Fellowship

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Review of I HAD A FRIEND  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well hello there Monty. Wishing you and yours a peaceful Thanksgiving. I have read some of your work before and enjoyed. This is the same but the end result is different for I am now a proud to a fan of yours. From start to finish this kept my interest, At the end I knew that your summary holds true.

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Review of Randoms by Rach  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well hello there Choconut ~ Revealing in Yellow. First off congratulations to you and all the others who talents are recognized. Yes I Had the same reaction of total surprise. Thought that your inclusion of the others was a touch of class. Once again congratulations and well deserved!

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Review of Lillies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well hello there anxious geek - struggling. Well I wish you a happy Thanksgiving but you are from Wale lol. Can't really comment on spelling because of that so let me just say this is an eloquent remembrance of a man past as well as opportunities to get to know more. Favorite line "... lost with a little elegance."

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LOVE SHOULDN'T HURT

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well hello there Sum1 wishing you and yours a great Thanksgiving. Title is befitting and the summary is cute and well used. Wow yet another example I am a fan. Well rhymed great flow and more than that romantic without being mushy. Thanks for posting.

WE'VE GOT TALENT

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Review of Speaking of Evil  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well hello there Jatog wishing you a great Thanksgiving! You points ring true there is still this kind of hate. Title attention getting and summary is put to excellent use. Although I agree with you for the most part to me it seems as if you paint Christianity with a broad stroke and thus an over characterization. Still you describe well how bullets and hate destroy,

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Happy Thanksgiving Jay O'toole. And thank you for this wonderful reminder. Before Thanksgiving was nothing more than a parade before Christmas. Many remembered it was a time to give thanks to God. This is a wonderful poem and I hope many read.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Jay O'Toole. This popped up in "Read & Review" and am so glad it did. Title is befitting and the summary is put to excellent use. Nice clipart but the nicest part of all is the poem. Real to live of a five year olds wonderment. Thanks for posting and have a I hope you enjoy your Thanksgiving as much as I enjoyed this poem ~ which would be immensely.

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Review of Dinu  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there Parminder Singh Aziz. Thanks for including the definition of "Hinglish". Title befitting and the summary sets the stage. A nice poem about coming of age. So nice to see that American's aren't the only ones that do this. Although concept a bit basic you made it funny real and enjoyable. Thanks for posting.

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Review of Cats And Dogs  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello there Harry. Here is yet more proof that I made a wise choice in fanning you. Title is befitting and in regards to the summary it is very "thought provoking". Yes you do a fantastic job using symbolism and put forth a statement that history need not dictate. FANTASTIC! Thanks for posting and have a great Thanksgiving!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there drifter if there were but a way to fan you twice. This is another strong piece. Great flow and a slice of life from the 1960. One typo you need quotation marks 3rd paragraph last line. Fun read loved the idea of using your 2 year old sister and the consequences. Thanks for posting and have a great Thanksgiving!

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Review of Sunset  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there Corrine Marie. Title is befitting and summary well used. Building and setting well described although a few overused descriptions were use. What really caught my attention was the last line, Leaving the reader to imagine what happens when the sun sets. Great touch. Thank's for posting and have a great Thanksgiving!

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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello there medical1105. I really would have liked to add on to the options but could find no way to do so, Also there was no way [that I can find] to select any of the options.So for now the rating will be a 3 just based on the idea and selections offered. If you have time to fix this of if I am in error please let me know.

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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello there Princess Megan Rose. I have read a few of these "Ghostbuster" based entries but yours by far was the creepiest to date. I used to work at a nursing home myself and I can esily beleve they are haunted. So when you shared a few of your stories i felt tinkles. Don't really know if I shuld say thanks for posting lol. But this was a fun read

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello there Jon Woodcrest. This is another reason why I browse the "NEWEST STATIC ITEMS" section to find gems such as this. Your title caught my attention and the summary made me want to read on. Well described and like the subtle non bloody descriptions of the tragedy, Just a great job!

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Review of Witch Moon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there Sunny what a wonderful signature. Red headed witch with huge green eyes. Excellent. Background sky excellent as is the face made of wood a great extra touch. And you are correct Gabby is indeed very talented. Thanks for posting and this young lady can visit my port anytime she wishes lol. Happy Thanksgiving!

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Review of When We Part  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again there rshear. You state in your email that you were kind of afraid of sharing. Well let me tell you I am so glad that you decided to. Loved this one as much as the last but for different reasons. This seem a bit more personal and a great way to think about what one says. Okay he sentiment has been done before but I think you do an excellent job with it. I am becoming a fan for I don't want to miss what you might post next.

WE'VE GOT TALENT

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Review of So When  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well hello there and welcome aboard NEWBIE! There are a lot of nice and helpful people here and I hope your time spent with us helps you in your goals toward writing. One thing that surely needn't any help was this piece right here rshear.Title caught meye summary made me want to read on and the work is marvelous.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hell there Angela Death. Your article on writing intrigued me so I just had to visit your portfolio and wound out finding this little gem. Most the time I would add this my list to review next Halloween but didn't want to miss out on the chance to review. The only line that throws me a little is "Many dentists well happily meet." To me it come off like the kids are happy. Still I could see this in a collection of Children's Halloween Poetry . Since the only flaw i see might wind up to be in translation I can not subtract from the 5 star rating.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well hello there and welcome NEWBIE! I hope you're time spend with us helps you fulfill your goals in writing. There are a lot of nice and helpful people here and I will try to be both. The title is befitting but it was the doubt of yourself that bid me to read on. Not a bad read at all all it need is a bit of polish. For instance the conflict between the brothers is over to suddenly. There is a lack of description of said bothers and even the king and queen. Like the motive my favorite line "stomped on by cruelty" Couple of misspelled words

thorne not thrown
hand not hands

Really see talent here like i said just a bit of polish can make this a fine story. Keep on writing and please let me know when you write more okay? Have a great Thanksgiving.

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