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Now for your review....Great Job. I enjoyed reading this piece. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. You brought to mind the reasons I write and how much I enjoy reading and writing. Thank you.
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Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job telling this story. It took great courage and strength to face your father, however I know the anger is what prompted it. Which sometimes is the best thing in the world. Looks like it was for you.
Now, I have a couple of suggestions. I would recommend separating the paragraphs with a space as they run together and make it difficult to read. Secondly, I would read through this carefully outloud and find any missing words.
Remember you don't have to take any of my suggestions. This is just my opinion, nothing more.
First off I would like to appologize for this taking me so long to get to. I truly am sorry.
I thought you did an excellent job on this piece. Fears can be overwhelming and crippling. I deal with a weight problem and am currently working on a diet for it and it's working well.
If this is about you, I would like to let you know that I am here to listen if you like or need someone to talk with.
I didn't find anything wrong to make note of and you filled this with heart. Excellent work!
I found this short story to be touching, heartfelt, and perfect. You did a wonderful job on this piece and it seems like a fairy tale come true. I think it suited the contest it was written for perfectly. I couldn't find a thing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. Excellent work.
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Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece. I enjoyed reading it and have a couple of suggestions for you.
1. i pertaining to oneself should always be capitalized.
2. I would recommend putting this piece into paragraphs or stanza's. I would suggest each one begin with your If you...line and the next is your You would...lines.
Now, these are simply my suggestions. You are under absolutely no obligation to take them or make changes to your work if you don't feel you want to or need to.
Excellent writing and I hope to see more of your work in the future.
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Now for your review....I found this piece on Read a Newbie page. I thought you did a great job and I only found one mistake, which I've noted below. I have no other suggestions and hope to see more of your work in the future.
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Now for your review....I wouldn't make a change to this piece at all. You did a wonderful job. I found it to be a wonderful tribute to the fallen soldiers. I found absolutely nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. Excellent work!
I came across this piece and thought it might be interesting. You didn't disappoint me. I didn't find any spelling errors or grammar mistakes, but I would recommend going through and correcting the line spacing the for paragraphs. Makes it easier to read. Also, for the speaking areas I would use quotes instead of the < > . Mind you this is completely up to you and these are only my opinions. You are under absolutely no obligation to take my suggestions.
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Now for your review....Wow, I thought you did a remarkable job on this piece. A beautiful piece. The only thing I would recommend is breaking this into two lines...removing the space between your line and Pain nor fear dare....Bringing together the two lines. I also found
She closes her eye, eye should be eyes
Please remember this is only my opinion. You are welcome to take it or simply delete my email. It's completely up to you.
I chose to review the entire folder instead of each one, at least at this point. I've enjoyed reading each and every piece within this folder. The use of color and images added to each piece giving me something visual to focus on and associate with the words. Each piece flowed nicely and I couldn't find a thing wrong in any of them.
As per your request, I've read this piece and I honestly don't see a problem with it. Might have been your teacher's taste. Some people just don't like certain things. I thought you did a good job on it and there were no errors that I could find and I have no suggestions.
Have you taken a moment to ask the teacher why he/she didn't like it? I make sure to do that when someone doesn't like it. I would recommend doing that.
I see why this piece sports a pretty pink ribbon. It's perfect. I love the image you used. You brought thoughts of my fiance to mind and I had to smile. This definately deserved to be published. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. Excellent!
I came across this piece while rummaging through your port. I found it absolutely cute, funny and scary all at once. I thought you did a wonderful job with it. I enjoyed the use of color and the hearts and flowers you added. To me this flowed nicely and read perfectly.
I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have absolutely no suggestions. Excellent work!
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Now for your review....I thought you did a great job on this piece. It leaves much to the imagination at least for me. Though a few thoughts have come to mind and I can understand. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. Great Job!
I think this is a beautiful tribute to your daughter and I hope that if you haven't already, that you will share this with her when she comes home. I pray for her safe return to her obviously loving family.
You did an awesome job on this piece. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make.
I read this and I know myself how true it is. However, I've stepped back and will live life and spend time with my children. Now, I'm a stay at home mom and we make sure we have time for each other and for the family. There are so many who don't and it's sad. Thank you for sharing this piece. I have not found anything wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions.
Again, another perfect piece. I love this one...some how I think this suits me sometimes. Or at least it used to. Anyway, I thought this was perfectly written and you brought to mind some memories I enjoyed and some I regret. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions. Excellent work!
First off I want to Thank You for sharing this. I am a mother and I could say the same things. I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece. You filled it with all the heart of a loving and caring parent who wants nothing more than his children's lives to be perfect. Absolutely Perfect!
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Now for your review....Absolutely Perfect. I know some of those questions have crossed my mind a time or two in the last four years. Though I know the answers if I were asked them, still once in a while the doubt comes. Great Job and I have found nothing wrong to make note of. I have no suggestions to make either.
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Now for your review....I loved this. I thought you did an awesome job on it and I loved the font. Made it different to read. I had to smile at some of the things you wrote, made me think of a few different things. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions. Excellent Job!
I came across this also on the Read a Newbie page. I had to read it strictly from your description. I thought it was precious and I hope one day you share this with your granddaughter. I thought it was beautifully written and perfect. Excellent Work!
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Now for your review....WOW! I love it! I thought you did an absolutely wonderful job on this piece. I found a couple of things that I've made note of below.
Each separate; a front and back yard. Remove the space after Each
So on it goes.We all know them. Put a space after the period and before the We
They can't have what thye're in need of. thye're should be they're
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Now for your review....I loved it. I thought you did a wonderful job with this piece. I would recommend removing all the spacing between each line...maybe breaking it down into small paragraphs. (Just a suggestion and you are under no obligation to make the change). I enjoyed reading the memories, I thought they were sweet and beautiful. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no other suggestions to make.
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Now for your review....You brought a smile to my face when I read this piece. I thought it was absolutely precious. Beautifully written. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. Excellent work!
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought this was perfect. I found it beautiful and heartfelt and loving. You did a wonderful job showing your kindness and understanding to another whose pain was unmistaskable. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. Excellent work!
Keep up the great writing!
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