I like your understanding of bad habits that leads to destruction of your life in slowly manner. I think person should fine a line between between bad habits that destroys you and your family and secrets which makes you happy .
That distinction make person more experienced in his life .
Life is short . Enjoy to fullest . Without affecting your happiness and health of yourself and others who matters for you .
Keep writing and best of luck for your life .
It is nice try by an Author . It shows love between two person. How an Author compare beauty of each person to natural beauty .
You can do better in poetry than this .
I hope you will write more poetry and prose in this subject of love .
Keep writing and hope you will find true love in life.
It is right. This poetry is small, crisp and has heavyweights to every word you choose.
I love to see you more kind of poetry related to this subject. I hope you will make an effort for this.
Waiting for more to come from your side. I hope you review mine too writings.
Best of luck with your life.
Have joy in your life.
I read somewhere change is inevitable, not in your hands but Transformation is in your hand. Transformation is the choice of an individual. I like to read inspirational quotes.
I like your connection of transformation with soul. Rigidity and flexibility are two opposite sides of the same coin. Rigidity promotes conservatism whereas Flexibility promotes liberalism. A person believing in transforming from one form to another is the true test of his life. It brings confidence in himself.
Waiting for more to come from your pen.
It is a fabulous piece of poetry. I can never imagine writing poetry on Waiting. I am impressed by your in-depth understanding and experiencing the Waiting phenomenon. Waiting is not limited to love. It is extending to your career, traveling, results, waiting for someone to death.
I will be very happy if you review my writings too.
Keep writing by your heart. Waiting for more to come.
It is an excellent piece of poetry depicting the true picture of the USA. According to me, the USA is unnecessary meddling into the domestic politics of other regions of the world. Take an example of Afghanistan, Syria, Iran and many more. The USA considered himself as world police and trying to influence others and want to maintain world hegemony that is known for. In the name of peace, the USA is destroying itself and opening a path for China and Russia so-called hardcore dictatorship political system to rule in this entire world. The USA is the oldest democracy of the world and preaches the message of equality, freedom and more in true sense.
Keep writing poetry reflecting the hypocrisy of the political system of the world.
It is touching poetry to me. I am personally attached to the feeling of touch. I am touched by your poetry. Your touching poetry reminds me of my touching love with a special person whom I always call first love of my life. It touched my heart.
I can see the feeling of love, togetherness, attachment, and affection of a girl with her boyfriend. I know love is blind, but the girl deserves to find her true. A boy who only loves her and moves in life along with his love. You can review my recent writings.
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