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Review of Invisible  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The writing sounds very emotional and concise.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This would be interesting to hear with music. Is this a rap song?
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Review of Starlight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written poetry.

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Review of The Condemned  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well written, I like reading and writing about military themes also.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A well written poem.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well written.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well written.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Nice images.
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Review of HUMANS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written poem.

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Review of Bush Whacked  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well said, I agree completely.
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Review of Another Woman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think these are getting much better as you write them. If I could make one suggestion, you might want to consider adding some dialogue. Have the opponent make comments as he is trying to protect the queen. This could prolong the sequence and build some tension.
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Review of The Body  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Interesting work.
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Review of The Woman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Actually I like this one even better, I think you should put more of these together and sell them as a collage.

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Review of Romance...NOT  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written.
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Review of A Mirror  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was very witty.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well said Prash.
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Review of Diamante  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well written.

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Review of VOICES  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the title of this.
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Review of Piano Praise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written, I was always fascinated with pianos.
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Review of Sometimes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
interesting poem
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Review of Grey Sins.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well said, very deep.
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Review of My Child  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
very deep
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This does have a lot of vivid images. It's like reading a travel guide.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very visual. I think you should post the picture.

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