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Review of Ruined Life  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I see a nice flow here
Emotional piece
I am alone in this world know, maybe you meant (now)
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
I found this very hard to read due to the color you are using.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
an excellent story poem.
Must taken some time to put that together.
Great!
No mistakes that I can see
great rhythm
good for you
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Review of a spade a spade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was a great read!
I cannot wait to get mine out !
I nice poetic piece on something as simple as a spade
That is a great talent
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Review of Could I Ever.....  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
I think this goes for everyone. We all have our habits of bad choice.
You revealed emotions and truthful.
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Review of Love is a sunset  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice comparison to nature.
A new love, turning to such sadness.
I like it !
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Review of Making the Ending  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This was a good story.
Brain cancer is a horrible thing.
I had a friend pass away from it.
They do tend to become different people.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Trials and tribulations are for sure lessons learnt.
although you are right most question is they would do it again.
You made a great point using words that are expressive.
I enjoyed this poem
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Review of Ruler of the Sky  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Well said
Love the description of raw nature taking its place
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Review of Opposites Attract  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well done!
I loved the flow of words,
The imagery was great!
I could not find anything wrong.
The only thing I see would be some punctuation
Just to give the reader a chance to breath.
Nothing more.
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Review of The Road Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
excellent read!
I never would have expected that twist in the end.
Go figure in just a few short paragraphs you turned someone into such a callus human being.
I could not imagine watching someone die in front of me like that.
Great imagery, loved the character.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem actually brought tears to my eyes.
I almost lost my sun last year and he was take from us and he then survived.
I told him very thing. God brought you back for a reason.
You have something that shines.
Your book is not finished. It is your book. You get to write it.
Great job!!
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Review of Priorities  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I totally agree with you on this.
Nice choice of words and you point is getting across very well.
Priorities are different with everyone.
Saving lives would be one of mine.
Hard to do that when we don't have the government backing us up.
The world is upside down right now, and people need to pay attention
to what is important.
Great poem
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Review of The Wolf  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A nice description of a wolf going after his prey.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well written. I really felt the emotions.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was great. I see how you made a comparison to evil and good.
The beauty in the butterfly as well and providing peace.
The caterpillar disgusting and evil.
Well done.
I loved the description.
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Review of Just Chill Out!  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
lmao. cute!
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Review of My first love  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Beautiful!
congratulations, not many last too long in a marriage these days.
We are celebrating our 25th in April. Not sure where the time went.
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Review of Not Here Again  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I love this piece! I have a friend with a mother in a home. She has Alzheimers disease.
I really felt this. So sad! Thanks for sharing !
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Review of Sensory Words  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I have the book of Thesaurus and I hold on to like a bible.
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Review of Passing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
A nice piece.
Although I think you can find a better choice of words, in between these two times
somehow doesn't flow with what you are saying.
Only an opinion.
also I would suggest you use punctuation throughout the poem.
Great start.
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Review of Farewell England  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
One of my travelling dreams is to visit England.
The way you describe is everything I envisioned.
Lovely write
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this story!
The poetic words flowed.
the perfect story told.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very deep!
The words touched me.
People care.
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Review of Healing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very nice!
You are right, we always see the light through tough times.
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