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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
These are all beautiful!
Poem 2 Love the last two sentences. Grabbed me.
Poem 1 That is when the world breathes again. Very nice!
Great job!
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Review of The Golf Links  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice!
My husband is very eager for this season to begin.
It cant come soon enough !
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Review of Forever Twisted  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
wow! Those are some scary lyrics.
I don't read many lyrics but I noticed you had no title.
Just a thought: FOREVER TWISTED
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice.
This is a form of poetry I really need to practice.
Great!
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Gorgeous !
I feel the love !
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Review of Official January  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
wow!
This was a great read.
I felt like was in a stagnant office just reading that.
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Review of Talking To Myself  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
It sounds like a free spirit, trapped and wanting to fly.
Nice imagery.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
aahhh
This is so sweet !
A great to send that perfect message.
There are not enough of romantic daters.
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Review of Free  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this !
Best part for me are the last two lines
Great place to be.
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Review of Titan  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nicely done
Great message.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this!
A nice flow of words.
A great inspirational advice.
You are so right that society has given us the misfortune of misleading guidelines to what beauty really is.
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Review of Sidewalk Cracks  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
nice poem
my advise would be to use punctuation
I felt like I was reading without taking a breath.
Some periods, or ; to the reader know when to stop .
Other wise a good write!
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Review of Sphinx  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Simple.
Well written.
I felt the emotion.
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Review of Crystal Painting  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Lovely. I love the imagery that you provided.
Nice flow of words.
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Review of Without You  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Sounds like a good start.
I think you should elaborate on who she is.
You have a few run on sentences.
A few commas uncalled for.
I think you can use ; in some sentences instead of commas
Other wise I think you have a great start.
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Review of It's a New Day  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my! I do relate.
Well said !
I suffer with the same thing. I also have lupus.
Everyday is a burden. some days I can work through it.
Other days are a right off. I have days in a fog.
I have myoclonic seizures as well.
Loved the letter.
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Review of Red  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked the scenario but I think you could have enhanced his emotions to the situation a little more.
Otherwise a good story.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great examples!
Great advice!
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Review of Love is not  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great read!
You are so right.
Been married for 25 yrs and I agree to it all.
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Review of Hurt  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is great ! could not have said it better myself.
Well done!
I have been there.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Love this !
Would be great to travel that much.
A really nice flow,
It kept my interest
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Great introduction..
nice work
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this !!!!!
Your words say it all for me.
Things need to change and if everyone practiced any of those words you speak of. We have a chance.
Thank you for sharing
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Review of Goodbye Mom  Open in new Window.
Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well now, you made me cry !
So over whelming and I know the heart ache.
Of course she has wings,
Beautiful
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Review by ~Lifelessons~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I just noticed that these were lyrics. As I was reading it I thought. geez this would make a great song.
There you have it.. I am a believer.
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