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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I was a little confused by your last paragraph. If I understand the point you are trying to make, I might have written it this way.

I plan to look into the lives of well-known families and people found in the public eye, as I travel on in my quest for information on depression. It will be interesting to see some of what they have been through, and how they recovered, if they did recover.

I enjoyed your article.



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Well written! Your description of the animals and the fields were written beautifully. Your words gave me a clear picture of your land. The only change I would make, would be to capitalize the g, in God. You mixed humor, patriotism, gratitude and simple interest, very well. I know there are many servicemen who would enjoy receiving your letter. My son is retiring from the Army, after 26 years of service and I know he'd have loved it!
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I found myself to be disappointed when the end arrived! I'm just a newbie, but I think this was beautifully written and the humor could be totally believable. I happen to have family that had a home on a golf course. It almost sounded like some of the experiences theu had, when they sold their home! Scary, that they really do walk among us! *Smile*
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I found your rhyme lilting and easy to read. I adored both the humor and honesty, regarding the drunk. Life experiences can be so painful. I enjoyed your poem and actually felt the pain of living with a drunk, through your words. I'd say...keep writing! *Smile*
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