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Jasmine Adler , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are here to celebrate you today, have a blessed day.
I came across this item on the read and review page of writing.com.
I found this poem to be sad but then it turned happy, this was a very descriptive poem and I thought you did a great job describing everything in it.
You seem to really love the color blue, I do too, as it is a beautiful color.
I am sorry you lost your friend but you did find a new one, which is a happy thing. However, I don't understand one line, you said If you could go back you would. But you follow that up with but I found someone new someone better.
If you found someone better then why would you want to go back?
Thank you for sharing and God Bless You... have fun!
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