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I came across this item as I was searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com this evening. I thought this was a beautifully written and very special poem. I truly loved it. I think you are an excellent writer and this poem proves my words to be true. and You are so very talented.

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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
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I came across this particular item while I was searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com. I thought this was beautifully written and it was interesting to me. It was very poetic in the words you chose. I would love to visit Las Vegas, though I probably never will because it is too far for me to travel with failing health. I only wish I could visit there..

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Hi SPACE COBWEBS @ 18! and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read an d review pages of writing.com this even ing as I was looking for something to read of interest to me.
I thought you did a great job on all of the pieces of your poetry that you wrote, however the third one was my favorite of them all. I thought it had a wonderful ending. you did a fantastic job on all of them.


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Hi and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for The Power Reviewers Group!
I came across this item as I was searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com this evening. I thought this little poem was just terrific. I know the form but it escapes my mind right now . It will drive me crazy until I remember it. Any way it is very good and I really enjoyed it.

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Hi BIG BAD WOLF is Merry and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item this evening on the read and review pages as I was searching for something of interest to read. I think this is a well written letter to the members of your group, who bid on an auction, I think it is a good thing they can have a second chance to win a lost auction if it is failed to be paid for.


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Hi bob county and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this little item on the read and review pages while I was searching for something interesting to read this evening. I think you must do a lot of scientific reading because you sure were able to create an interesting scientific piece of literature that is very thought provoking and neat..
I think you did a fantastic and outstanding job on writing this item, however I did see a little mistake:


How long did a dinsaur live

I think you meant to say a dinosaur live. not dinosaur live...

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Hi Angelnerd and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
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This was a really different kind of fiction story, though I liked it. It kind of threw me a little bit because of the second person references. It is kind of hard to read it that way, I thought it was a little bit off putting.
However, the story itself was very good so I commend you on that. Your idea of a blind date is quite good I thought.

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Hi Happy Dragon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
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I really loved what you wrote in your essay, I thought you did a superb and fantastic job with such a positive message that we should all pick up our crosses and sacrifice ourselves as Christ Jesus has done. Your essay was quite different and not exactly what I was expecting from it. Though I have never seen the play I think you did a great job creating this essay.

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Hi Lady Catesstrophe and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com.
I thought this poem was heartwarming and sad. It is so hard to say good bye to someone we care about. I hope you one day get to see your friend again. Your poem was so good I really liked it very well. I especially liked where you call each other funny names.
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Hi elayna rose and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item while searching for something to read for our raid today. I saw this on the read and review page. I thought this was the coolest poem ever. It really had some good or even great rhymes. The rhythm was perfect as well. I think this was a very well written poem. You did an excellent job creating it. I just loved it.
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Hi rl and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on writing.com's read and review page this afternoon. I think this is a beautiful poem about the clouds, which I love.
I recall being a little girl and lying on the ground looking up at the clouds and trying to guess what they looked like. I once saw a cloud that looked just like Queen Nephratiti excuse the spelling. Your poem is just lovely and I commend you on writing it.


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Hi Harry and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item while searching for something to read on writing.com's read and review pages this afternoon. You really told an interesting story with your poem. It's true, you never know what kind of fabulous lives an older person might have lived. I know my aunt met dozens of movie stars, President Regan and had a great life which she never bragged about.
I was amazed by what she had accomplished in her lifetime.


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Hi Every Thorn Has A Rose and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on writing.com's read and review pages this afternoon. I thought this was a good first poem for the site. You spoke from the heart which always makes poetry so interesting. I wish you well and hope you are not judged. I saw a tiny little mistake on one of the lines:

But I searched for one anyways

in the above sentence it should say one anyway not anyways.

but that is just a small little error than anyone could make. you did a good job creating this little poem.


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Hi Master Sergent M and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I came across this item for our raid on writing.com's read and review pages this afternoon.
I found this poem and it was so interesting. It put me in mind of our president. As he looks down on people and is afraid someone might be better than he. But that aside, you did a good job writing a poem.
The message came across loud and clear. You did a great job creatin g this little poem.

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Hi spidey and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on Writing.com's read and review page this afternoon, I thought I'd give it a read for our PRG raid. This was an unusual poem. It was well written but the message was very strange. This person is pulled out of paradise according to the item description on your poem. The title is appropriate for this -particular poem. I think you did a fine job creating this item.


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Hi {suser:huntersmoon } and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on Writing.com's read and review pages.
I really liked the image you displayed with the poem. It really fit well.
The title is perfect and appropriate for the item. The item description was very helpful, and also told the form of poetry which was minute poetry. I've never written this form before but it looks interesting. I love the message you conveyed with your poem it was awesome.
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Hi EmeliaBrayStafford and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on writing.com's read and review pages.
I thought you did a fine job writing about what the novel is going to be about.
It sounds very interesting, and It makes me curious. It is a good teaser for the novel. I thought the writing sounded very nice. You did a good job creating this pre writing of the novel. it is a good thing that makes the reader wonder about the next chapter.

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Hi Soldier_Mike and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com
I thought this was an unusual poem, I really didn't understand about the (fib)
form of poetry. But you did teach me something I've never heard of before.
I think you did a good job creating this strange form of poetry.


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Hi 🌖 HuntersMoon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read and review pages this morning and thought I'd give you a review. I loved this item, it is so heartfelt and beautiful. I wish I had written it, it is so extraordinarily good. I think you really used your imagination writing this one. You certainly used many poetic devices while writing it. you used both assonance and alliteration, rhyme as well as having a wonderful rhythm. You should be so proud at having written this one. I just love it and I can't say enough good about it. my favorite part is


I'd join a flock of birds in flight upon their skyward quest.
I'd dance between the sun's rays as it set in the west.
I'd drift among the flickering stars that would light the way
to a path of new discoveries and adventures every day.

I thought this was so wonderful I can close my eyes and picture what you are saying and it makes me feel free.
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Hi THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read and review pages and I wanted to do it for my raid review, which is all about spring, although yours is about a basset hound doing a rap I couldn't resist it. It is so cute, you really did do a great job creating this little rap song. the title is so appropriate for the poetry, and the item description is helpful. I just loved your poem or rap.


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Hi Jim Happenings and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this cute little poem on the approved list of poetry for the prg raid today. I thought this little poem was so funny. especially the end of it where you say they call you beefcake. I have never took off on my own or with friends for a spring break holiday. I only went with my family. but we had fun in Florida. I love going to the lake, but I however don't drink beer, I can't stand the taste of it. But I do hope you had a great time at spring break.

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