Hi Soldier_Mike and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com
I thought this was an unusual poem, I really didn't understand about the (fib)
form of poetry. But you did teach me something I've never heard of before.
I think you did a good job creating this strange form of poetry.


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Hi 🌖 HuntersMoon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read and review pages this morning and thought I'd give you a review. I loved this item, it is so heartfelt and beautiful. I wish I had written it, it is so extraordinarily good. I think you really used your imagination writing this one. You certainly used many poetic devices while writing it. you used both assonance and alliteration, rhyme as well as having a wonderful rhythm. You should be so proud at having written this one. I just love it and I can't say enough good about it. my favorite part is


I'd join a flock of birds in flight upon their skyward quest.
I'd dance between the sun's rays as it set in the west.
I'd drift among the flickering stars that would light the way
to a path of new discoveries and adventures every day.

I thought this was so wonderful I can close my eyes and picture what you are saying and it makes me feel free.
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Hi THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read and review pages and I wanted to do it for my raid review, which is all about spring, although yours is about a basset hound doing a rap I couldn't resist it. It is so cute, you really did do a great job creating this little rap song. the title is so appropriate for the poetry, and the item description is helpful. I just loved your poem or rap.


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Hi Jim Happenings and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this cute little poem on the approved list of poetry for the prg raid today. I thought this little poem was so funny. especially the end of it where you say they call you beefcake. I have never took off on my own or with friends for a spring break holiday. I only went with my family. but we had fun in Florida. I love going to the lake, but I however don't drink beer, I can't stand the taste of it. But I do hope you had a great time at spring break.

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Hi Alma Marina Terra and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the prg approved raid list on their website.
This is a well written little piece of poetry, I really did like this item.
You did A great job creating it. The title is perfect and very appropriate for the item. The item description is also very helpful as it tells what the poem is all about. This was a very nice little ditty.


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Hi dogpack saving 4premium+ and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the raid approved list at the prg.
I see that you wrote this little item for the bi-weekly oriental poetry contest.
I hope you did well on the contest. This appears to be a Haiku to me. It is well put together and it even rhymes in the first couple of lines.
I thought the title of this was appropriate but the item description needed to say something about the poem besides that it was written for a contest. but you did excellent writing this piece.


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Hi Jay O'Toole and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the approved list of poetry on the PRG list.
I thought this was a very well written piece of poetry and you have done a wonderful job writing it. The title of this poem was very appropriate for the poem. I thought the poem rhymed well and had a nice rhythm. The item description was helpful in telling us what the poem is about.



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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
This is a unique and quite good haiku sonnet, I have never seen this form before, you have really taught me something about a new form this evening. I liked the message your poem conveyed, I thought that the title was quite appropriate for the poetry, I also thought you needed to write something a little different in the item description , that is very important that you tell something about the piece there.
That is what makes the reader decide whether or not to continue on reading or not. I did like what your poem said about spring though, I found it to be quite lovely.

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Hi Sharmelle's Expressions and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I really loved your poetry about the spring flowers and how they are a gift from God. I always like when people especially writers give praise to God for the gifts he bestows upon us. You did a great job showing thanks for the wonderful flowers of spring given to us by God. I think it shows a lot of character on your part that you give praise to our Lord. You did a good job creating this wonderful poetry.
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Hi maliapens and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found this item listed on the list of approved writings for our raid.
The title is appropriate and the item description is helpful as it says that the poetry is about spring. I love spring and your poem lists all of the good qualities of spring. You did a great job creating this item. I love to hear the birds sing and to see the berries hanging from the vines. I love to watch the blue jays swooping in to feed on the blueberries.


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Hi Mena and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I found this item on the list of approved poems for our raid tonight. I like the spring and so I chose this item, The title is appropriate for the item, The item description is helpful as it tells what you see in spring. I liked your poem you use many poetic devices in writing this poem, I noticed alliteration as well as assonance you did a very good job creating this item. You are a talented writer as you used the sound, smell, and sight of spring in your poem.

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Hi Sharmelle's Expressions and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I chose this item because I loved the title, I thought it was so wonderful, I also thought it was appropriate. The Item description is very helpful as it tells us readers about the poetry.
The poetry is so beautiful and I think you did a wonderful job creating it. I liked that you wrote about a special blessing from God, I like spiritual poetry and yours was so lovely. You did so good with this item.
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