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Review of A Glowing Purpose  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
This piece is well put together, and has a ring to it that makes it memorable in the reader's ear. I do however, feel that the continuity of the poem would be more emphasized by changing the structure a bit and perhaps making the purpose a tad more understandable!
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Review of Daughter  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
A nicely-penned piece with somber overtones of retrospection and possibly remorse? Anyway, I liked it!
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Review of Again Last Night  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (3.5)
I really like this, but feel it needs fleshing out a bit more to make it more memorable! Nicely done!
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Review of My angel  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is simple and quite captivating! Good word usage and showig much promise!
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Review of expression  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good start here but needs more spit and polish to make it more than just a casual read!
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