Ohayou gozaimasu...my overall impression is this is so AWESOME.
The rhyme is so vivd.
The wording you use is so meaningful.
The spelling is found no error.
The poem is EXCELLENT.
FINAL THOUGHTS; YOU DO A GREAT JOB...
Keep on writing a great poem like this one.
You have a potential to be a great author in the near future.
Qhayou gozaimasu Mpuser,
overall impression is so EXCELLENT reading to your great poem. Some of your verses is so very meaningful to my well-being, the verse is really effective to my deep emotion but you're right it's all but TRUE.
YOU ARE REALLY GENUINE GREAT WRITER IN DEED!!!!
My FINAL THOUGHTS; YOU DO A GREAT JOB!
WRITE ON!!!
P.S.
Maiko dear....please do me a tiny FAVOR,kindly visit my port check and please kindly rate my new poem title:''Too Blessed To Be Stressed.''
THANK YOU SO MUCH IF YOU DO SO,I'LL BE GREATLY APPRECITED IT.
LOVE AND PEACE,
REBECCA DANIELS
ANGEL MAIKO....AWESOME...overall impression is so perfect!!!!
Very COOL!!! I REALLY LOVE IT! SO MUCH IT'S EFFECT IN MY ENTIRE SOUL,THE GREATNESS,,,THE WORD'S SO BRILLIANT LIKE THE NIND OF THE AUTHOR...'' IT WAS '' YOU AND ME, MY DEAR ANGEL MAIKO...MY BELOVED ANGEL.
MISS YOU CRAZY!!!!
Howdy Angel Maiko...AWESOME...my favorite line is,'' Love is not ,Ended with loss,It is only a part of the cost...it is really TRUE.
Your POETRY is so really meaningful to me because you are my ''TRUE LOVE AND MY SOULMATE''
Wish that I could see you again in here in CLEARWATER,FLORIDA.in the future.
hoping you also visit my port and rated my new poem. THANK'S SO MUCH IF YOU DO SO...
Howdy Mateo,
My overall impression is so AWESOME!!!
You kow me, I dedicated my whole life to our DEAR LORD JESUS,So everytime that I read about HIM,I really read this over and over again because it is so GREAT and so AWESOME.
Grammatically speaking, perfectly no find errors.
Final Thoughts; YOU DO A GREAT JOB!
Howdy Mouser,
My overall impression is so AWESOME!!!
The concept of the poem is so sad but so meaningful to me and it effect so deeply in my heart and soul.
Grammatically speaking; perfectly find no error.
Tone; is very cool and good indeed!
Rhume; very nice and so vivd.
I love the whole poetry of yours, that's why i repeatedly read it over and over again. So AWESOMELY BRILLIANT LIKE THE AUTHOR ITSELF.
Final Thoughts; You Do a Great JOB!!!!'
Ohayou Gozaimasu dresselm/ Angel Maiko,
My overall impression is so Awesome!!!
The main plot of the story is so cool, but have had a very meaningful meaning to me that make me cry about my past lovelife with i thought the man of my life that should be my SOULMATE.
Imagery is so good and vivid.
Grammatically speaking is so perfectly written well, no found error on it.
Final Thoughts; YOU DO A GREAT JOB!!!!
WRITE ON!!!!
Peace and love,
lovingly/ SHONEN DANIELS
Ohayou gozaimasu, Angel Maiko / dresselm,
My overall impression is so AWESOME!
tHE MAIN PLOT of the great article is so sad but bring sad emotion to the readers. Especially to myself, full of sad emotion in the past love life of mine.
Imagery; is very good .
Grammatically speaking is written perfectly. no errors found.
Final thoughts; the author have a very BRILLIANT MIND AND VERY CREATIVELY PERFECT IN ANY ASPECT OF ART'S OF WRITING!
Ohayou gozaimasu Mitch,
Bravo!!! This is so AWESOME!!!
My overall impression is OUTSTANDINGLY BRILLIANT!!!
The writer/ author have had a BRILLIANT MIND!!!
The rhyme, rhythm,was so good and have a very nice reflection on it.
Grammatically speaking; is written so perfectly.
Final Thoughts; GREAT JOB!!!
Keep on writing a great poem like this one!!!
Ohayou Gozaimasu RadioShea,
My overall impression is so OUTSTANDINGLY AWESOME!!!
Flow; the short story flow so awesome, that's why i read the story again and again, so neat!
Spelling / Grammar; is really perfectly find no errors.
Plot; the main plot of the story is very good.
You really got the attention of the readers to read your great short story.
Actually, in the near future you'll be a great WRITER/ AUTHOR in the making.
Final thoughts; You do a great job with this one, AWESOME!!!!
It's my honor and pleasure to rated this with 5.0 stars.
WRITE ON!!!
Peace and Love,
lovingly ( Rebecca S.Daniels)
Howdy Britt,
Overall impression is EXCELLENTLY AWESOME!
Rhyme; have a very nice reflection.
Imagery ; very good and so vivid.
Spelling/ Grammar; perfect and no found errors.
Ohayou Gozaimasu ( Good morning)Philip Roberts,
My first impression is AWESOMELY Excellent! Your poem is really outstandingly perfect.
Rhyme is so cool and good and have a nice reflection.
Spelling / Grammar; are perfectly no found errors.
Final Thoughts; You do a great job for this awesome poem.
WRITE ON!!!!
Peace and Love,
lovingly ( Rebecca Shonen Daniels)
Howdy Doug,
HAPPY VALENTINES!!! This is Awesome! My overall impression is EXCELLENT! Nic e rhyme and thr rhythm is cool. iMAGERY Is good and so vivid.
Final Thougths is you're doing great!
kEEP UP THE GOOD WORKS!
Ohayou gozaimasu, KrisAnn S.Bell,
Overall impression is AWESOME! 5.0 is deserving rate for this writing. The content of the story deserved to have a place in winning in the contest. I enjoy reading your story, the story's plot is so meaningful to me.
Spelling/ Grammar is finely perfect.
Imagery; Is so vivid.
Final Thoughts; You do a great job!
You have a potential of being a good WRITER/ AUTHOR in the nearest future.
Wish you the best luck in the future!
Keep on writing a good story like this one...I enjoy reading this!
Please kindly do me a favor, if you can visit my port and also rate one of my Poem title '' Treasure'', i do greatly appreciated it if you do so.And do visit again your port and rated some of your great articles. Thank's so much in advance.
Peace and May God Bless You,
lovingly ( Reba Smith)
howdy xXDarkOmegaxX,
Strenths; The level of details and description creates a great deal of mental pictures without being overwhelming or overexaggerated. I think you have a pretty good balance with the imagery . I am especially fond of the first line and the last lines of the second and third stanzas.
On a emotional level, I found myself being influenced very subtly by the presentation of nature and its small power that were in the story. It really got me thinking about the beauty of the story and the main content of the piece.
Overall; I found this story to be very entertaining and a very good description of the piece.
Words choice; word selection is perfect and very easy to understand to read. You do a great job!
Final thoughts; WRITE MORE!
PEACE and Cheer,
lovingly
hello J P Ruiz,
My overall impression; Awesome!!!
You're right, God is love...Man needs love....and most of all, Man needs God, that's for sure.You're piece is short but very meaningful! It's touch my heart. It's my honor and privilege to awarded your piece with five star's of excellency!
Final thoughts; I encourage you to write more.
Peace and HAPPY HOLIDAY!!!
WRITE ON!!!
Cheer,
lovingly :)
hey kudo Sampson,
First of all, I thought it was Great! The first paragraph captured my attention and held it the word you use are strong, short and you really convey the emotional aspect of it.
Flow ; the flow of your piece is EXCELLENT!
No interruptions or odds beats along the way. It was very smooth and fluid, just the way it should be.
Anyway, Overall....I LOVE the whole short mystery story...its quite rare that I like the main story of it.
So, you have done an excellent job. It was so awesomely written. You have a real talent to be great writer, and I encourage you to keep writing . I hope to read more from you in the near future.
Thanks so much for sharing your great writing and its my honor and great privilege to awarded your write with five stars of excellency!
Final thoughts; WRITE ON!!!!
Peace and HAPPY HOLIDAY!!!
Cheer,
lovingly :)
hi kudo sampson,
Overall impression is ; EXCELLENT!
I thought this was an excellently written, descriptive piece of short adventure story.
Imagery; Good, adventerous and vivid.The author give us a thought to ponder this day.How easy it is to let others do the works and we might tend to reap the benefits.
Emotional Cord Struck; The author uses the wordfits on the description of the main content of the story.
Tone ; Good depth of feelings. Wisdom is felt here. Read between the lines.
Flow; Flow is good , the words choice is good,too.
Overall; This is totally outstanding!
Thanks so much for allowing me to review your writing, its my pleasure and honor to given you a five stars awarded to your excellency!
HAPPY HOLIDAY and Cheers,
lovingly :)
ohayou gozaimasu Argus,
I thoughts this was an excellently poem. Written descriptive piece of a great work.
Imagery; Very good and vivid. I enjoyed reading it and have nothing to offer in the way of improvement. This is AWESOME!
fLOW / RHYTHM; The rhyme scheme is good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice; Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Final thoughts; Great Job!
Thank you for allowing me to review your writing. I consider it an honor and great privilege.
Peace and HAPPY HOLIDAY!
Hi Wally,
Title; Fits the content well.
Imagery; Good and vivid. The author gives us a thought to ponder this evening. How easy it is to let others do the works and we might tend to reap the benefits.
Emotional cord struck; the author uses a great description of the main content of the piece.
Interpretation; Look for perfection in the form of God's creation.
Tone; Good depth of feelings.Wisdom is felt here. Read between lines.
Spelling; none errors found.
Flow; Flow is good.The words choice is good.
Overall; Good read.
Strong points; Sense of realism and true emotions...nice flow.
Final Thoughts; Great Job!!!!
hi Kris D'Amato,
Title; Fits the content well.
Imagery; Good and vivid.The author give us a thought to ponder this day. How easy it is to let others do the work and we might tend to reap the benefits.
Emotional cord struck; the author uses a depth wording , the rhyme is good and have a nice reflection.
Interpretation; Look's perfect in every form of verses.
Tone; Good depth of feelings, Wisdom is felt here.
Spelling; no error found.
Flow ; Flow is good. The word choice is good.
Overall; Excellent read.
Strong points; Sense of realism and true emotions...nice flowthroughout nothing seemed forced.
Final thoughts; Great job!
WRITE ON!!!
HI BScholl your short story is very EXCELLENT, impressively excellent. Very inspiratioal and educational. The syntax used is very accurate.Spelling is no find any errors.Very good indeed.
Final thoughts; GREAT JOB!!!
WRITE ON!!!
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