A very timely piece of angst against the establishment. Well done. The piece could use polishing, but the desired effect has been achieved.
Personally, I feel your anxiety. I think our system of corruption has reached a point of being completely beyond control. For too long now, we have forgotten the very principles on which this country was founded.
If you have not seen his message, take a look at Ron Paul for President in 2008. He offers a REAL alternative to the establishment.
Far too many holes in this. I still have yet to understand the reason people who prounounce such undying faith feel the need to justify themselves. If you believe on faith, then believe... but at least acknowledge that your belief is based on faith. Does it not belittle your entire arguement just by the nature of defending it at all? The problem with religion is not the religious nor the non-believers. The problem is that no one can allow anyone else to believe differently.
If any the majority of organized religious sects are correct in ANY of their teachings, they will survive... everyone else perishes.
Maybe its not the religion itself that needs to be justified. Maybe people should question their choice to praise a God who creates so much pain and suffering.
I appreciate the poetic nature of your personal rebellion. I agree in nature with the majority of your views, but must admit I reach a different conclusion. For the first time, the is a real opportunity to put a true third party guy on one of the Big Two tickets. Take a look at Ron Paul. You will like what you see.
The writing style was well crafted.
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