Ay-yay-yay... and you keep doing such great work. I hope you have been published... or at least looking to getting published. You will be very SUCCESSFUL!
I thought this was very drawn out but it was for a good reason, it built my interest to keep reading more lines to get to the next line over and over again. I really enjoyed it! Thabks!
This is an example of a great horror story... it starts with strange minute details and keeps the readers attention and the reader wondering what the outcome will be at the next sentence; and then the kicker, when the character that was aware of his surroundings is effected. I enjoyed it!!
This is a great read for Halloween kiddies everywhere. I feel its a little drawn out but it makes for the suspense of the kids. I think it would have been a little more detailed on the lumberjack and how he came to be as well as what turned him evil. But this is fine. Thanks for sharing!
This is GREAT!!! Horribly funny! Thank you for sharing... may I copy this and give it to my daughter? She would get a kick out of this. Thanks again!!!
great! everytime i think i have read something of yours that i think is a 'best' you always put something out there to catch my interest and hook me.
Like a fish... i think i may have swallowed the hook, I guess i should be reading your port.
This is great. I like it a lot... its funny because you teach your kids to listen and do what you tell them. great twist, would like to have read what happened after the shovel...
Good one! A child mind for an adult and then using their fear along with a loved ones encouragement just to end up dead! Great twist and use of angels and family.
This is not only gory but funny as well. Gory in the normal tense as far as the story is twisted, and funny as in the endings twist as well. I guess it shouldn't be funny, but just thinking about it ands imagining the scene just seems as a scary, funny twisted ending. Keep up the GREAT work!
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