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Review of Understanding  Open in new Window.
Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)

I am stunned. Your expression of that was beautiful.
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Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hey T.L!!

Ohhh, I like this one alot! Very short (but sweet), and well thought out words, also. The color accents it well...

Good job!

{no spelling errors of course*Smile*)

Sincerely and always, Mistress Jade

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Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hey T.L.Finch,

I love your descriptions in this, the lines 'A breath of beauty, midsummer's dream' were my favorites. This poem was simple, yet so full of feeling. You did a good job of expressing your feelings! Keep up the good work.

Mistress Jade

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"Love is not blind; it sees more, not less. But because it sees more, it is willing to see less."

"I live in the past because most of my life is there."







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Review of DEAR SANTA  Open in new Window.
Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello FLIP...

Welcome, again, to my contest! It's good to have you in the second round.

The review: This poem was so heartfelt, I really enjoyed it. I could almost feel the emotion being emitted from it. You did a really good job with this; keep up the good work!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello ivamae,

A review of Waiting for the Day...


*Flower1*Description: The descriotion of most of the carecters is absent in this piece. What made me give it such a low rating is that it does not exactly say who is the person narrating the poem. Because of that, the poem is really confusing.

*Flower2*Imagery: It was pretty good, like I said the absence of the charecter distracted me.

*Flower3*Flow: There was not much of a flow to this piece even though it rhymed.

*Flower4*Suggestions: I would suggest putting another stanza in that describes who is speaking/thinking.

*Flower5*Errors: I found no spelling/grammar errors in this poem.

*Flower6*Personal/Overall impression: I really liked the feel this poem gave, and I also like the point to the piece. Good job!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade


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Review of True Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey intuey,

This is soo simple, yet at the same time so beautfiul. In this case, a few words express emtion wonderfully. Great job...(and also, i'm sure you already know this but I thought tell you anyways, there are no spelling/grammar errors in this piece*Smile*)

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade


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Review of THANK YOU  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey, FLIP Says Happy Turkey...

This is pretty good, mildly discriptive and great imagery. Good job overall!!

I just found one thing...

melancholly should be *melancholy

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review of Goodbye  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Theresa DeCicco...

This poem is so beautiful!!! The feeling and emotion practically leap off the page. It's descriptive and the imagery is good. Great job!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hey MistyRain,

This poem is pretty good, but the flow could be better. I love what its about, though, and the imagery is very good.

Found a few typos...

disappoinments should be *disappointments

depts should be *debts

mavelous should be *marvelous

Overall good job, write on!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Popcorn Joy,

Wow, this is soo beautiful. It was discriptive, flowed perfectly, and was just wonderful. Thanks so mcuh for an awesome read!!!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review of Skies of Blue  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey,

This poem is beautiful. I could pracicly feel everything being described in the poem! You have a great piece of work, good job!

Just one thing: rythmic is spelled rhythmic*Smile*

Good job overall!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review of My Wonderland  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hey girl,

Sorry I gave it such a low rating, but this is much more of a prose then a poem. Nice try tho*Bigsmile*

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review of FALL  Open in new Window.
Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey girl,

I like this poem. It's pretty good. I would suggest putting it in short stanzas instead of those long sentences because then it seems more like a prose. But overall, good job!

Here are the gps for entering.

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review of Not Meant For Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear mram16,

I'd like to say that this is one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read. The flow is perfect, and it is discrptive and certainly well written. Amazing job, keep up the great work!!!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

Check it out, all are welcome...

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Review of Lovers club  Open in new Window.
Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear unnoticed:

I really, really like this piece. It is discriptive and well written. My favorite line is,

Doing absolutely nothing,
just laying there shivering.
Until you hold my hand,
and your warmth becomes present
throughout my entire body.

It's very true*Smile*

Thanks for sharing!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review of The Stereo  Open in new Window.
Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
hello Cros,

First I'd like to say thank you for entering my poetry contest!

The review: I liked this poem, but it was rather repetitive. You seemed to use the same words over and over. It kind of exausted them. It has a pretty good flow to it.

Overall I liked it, thanks for sharing!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

P.S Here are the gps for entering!

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Review of Forever Flash  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello FLIP,

First off, I'd like to say thanks for entering my poetry contest!

The review: I like this piece alot. It decribes with true sincerity the peaceful and quick lingering of a falling star. It all was written well and is very dicrpitive. Good job; write on!!!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

P.S; Here are the gps for entering*Smile*

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Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Ann Ticipation:

I love this piece. I could almost see everthing happening, and the hurt expressed in this poem is very real. I found no grammer/spelling errors, good job with that...thanks for a great read.

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade



C'mon in...all are welcome...

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Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello again jom86,

I like this poem alot, because that is what many of us wish we could do, but unfortunatly cannot.

The one thing I did not like about it were the colors in it. They distract the poem, and I had to read it many times times to understand it. I would suggest, if you want color in the poem, make it all one color. But that just really distractes the reader. (Just my opinion*Smile*)

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review of My Kitty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello jom86,

First I would like to say thank you for entering
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The review: This is a very funny poem, I liked it. Especially the last line,

From saber-tooth to wild cat
To walking ball of fur and fat.

You had being able to picture the cat. Good job for great imagery! lol

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

P.S Here are the gps for entering*Smile*
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Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Ann Ticipation,

I like this piece alot. It's very discrptive and I enjoyed it.

Two things:

My King for a moment lost His golden crown.

Who are you talking about? It does not say in the poem. I was confused...could it be your husbund...an adored man or leader...or God?

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I didn't fight as I know I should,

Know should be knew. This whole poem is written in past tense except for that one word.

(all just my suggestions*Smile*)

Overall very good piece, write on!!!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade



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Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Marys-Tears,

First I would like to say thanks for entering my poetry contest,
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Wow. This is beautiful, and so so true. I am a born again christian and I know exactly where you are coming from and what you mean by this poem.

It made me feel empty but at the same time full, a very weird feeling. Thanks for sharing...

Sincerely and always, Malli-Jade

P.S Here are the gps for entering my contest*Smile*
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Review of Lake Wickaboag  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello J. A. Buxton,

I liked this piece alot! It took me to where you were, and I could see the lake, I could hear the laughter...You do a very good job discriptivly!

I didn't find any spelling/grammer errors either, good job with that.

Thanks for a great read!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade

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Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Susan,

I like this! Descriptive and beautiful...short and sweet, yet so true. Thanks for sharing!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade


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Review of Move On  Open in new Window.
Review by Malli_Jade Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello KEL,

I like this piece, but it is very short. To get the rating up, you might try to lengthan it a bit. (just a suggestion*Smile*)

You have a very good start, and if you make it longer I would love to come back and look at it!

Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade
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