I love your descriptions in this, the lines 'A breath of beauty, midsummer's dream' were my favorites. This poem was simple, yet so full of feeling. You did a good job of expressing your feelings! Keep up the good work.
Welcome, again, to my contest! It's good to have you in the second round.
The review: This poem was so heartfelt, I really enjoyed it. I could almost feel the emotion being emitted from it. You did a really good job with this; keep up the good work!
Description: The descriotion of most of the carecters is absent in this piece. What made me give it such a low rating is that it does not exactly say who is the person narrating the poem. Because of that, the poem is really confusing.
Imagery: It was pretty good, like I said the absence of the charecter distracted me.
Flow: There was not much of a flow to this piece even though it rhymed.
Suggestions: I would suggest putting another stanza in that describes who is speaking/thinking.
Errors: I found no spelling/grammar errors in this poem.
Personal/Overall impression: I really liked the feel this poem gave, and I also like the point to the piece. Good job!
This is soo simple, yet at the same time so beautfiul. In this case, a few words express emtion wonderfully. Great job...(and also, i'm sure you already know this but I thought tell you anyways, there are no spelling/grammar errors in this piece)
I like this poem. It's pretty good. I would suggest putting it in short stanzas instead of those long sentences because then it seems more like a prose. But overall, good job!
I'd like to say that this is one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read. The flow is perfect, and it is discrptive and certainly well written. Amazing job, keep up the great work!!!
Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade
Check it out, all are welcome...
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First I'd like to say thank you for entering my poetry contest!
The review: I liked this poem, but it was rather repetitive. You seemed to use the same words over and over. It kind of exausted them. It has a pretty good flow to it.
First off, I'd like to say thanks for entering my poetry contest!
The review: I like this piece alot. It decribes with true sincerity the peaceful and quick lingering of a falling star. It all was written well and is very dicrpitive. Good job; write on!!!
Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade
P.S; Here are the gps for entering
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I love this piece. I could almost see everthing happening, and the hurt expressed in this poem is very real. I found no grammer/spelling errors, good job with that...thanks for a great read.
Sincerely and always, Malli_Jade
C'mon in...all are welcome...
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I like this poem alot, because that is what many of us wish we could do, but unfortunatly cannot.
The one thing I did not like about it were the colors in it. They distract the poem, and I had to read it many times times to understand it. I would suggest, if you want color in the poem, make it all one color. But that just really distractes the reader. (Just my opinion)
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Description: The descriotion of most of the carecters is absent in this piece. What made me give it such a low rating is that it does not exactly say who is the person narrating the poem. Because of that, the poem is really confusing.
Imagery: It was pretty good, like I said the absence of the charecter distracted me.
Flow: There was not much of a flow to this piece even though it rhymed. 
Suggestions: I would suggest putting another stanza in that describes who is speaking/thinking. 
Errors: I found no spelling/grammar errors in this poem. 
Personal/Overall impression: I really liked the feel this poem gave, and I also like the point to the piece. Good job!
