Wow, this was moving. I honestly didn't think that the author would bring religion into the writing, nor did I think they would end it how they did, albeit the ending was an anti-climax, it was good nonetheless.
This chapter was definitely a good non-choice intro to the chapters beyond this one that I have wrote (well, I wrote SOME of them...) And I sincerely hope this storyline continues, as it seems very interesting. As the chapter progressed, I honestly forgot it was in the Equestria Girls universe where they are human, and I think the chapter is better because of that. 3.5/5 stars... Good job goldscout, good job indeed
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