Marcus's (marchiggins) Reviews

Marcus

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25 Public Reviews Given

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#4480319

Review of My Angel

Review by Marcus

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Pretty good. Also have been in that situation. The moment you realize that you forgot and that intense feeling of panic. I hope the poem paid off as intended. I actually enjoyed it enough to where I wanted to read more. If you do a longer one of the original I would definitely be down for that.

-Marcus

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#4480307

Review of Love at First Sight

Review by Marcus

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

And mic drop! Boom. Good stuff, that's a 5ver right there.

-Marcus

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#4480303

Review of Now or Never - Poem

Review by Marcus

Rated: E

| (2.0)

Its Now or Never! Really hit on that huh? Must have had something happen to have those words continuing like that. However, I agree with you and like the message. The rhyming itself is not a favorite of mine but the message was good.

-Marc

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#4480293

Review of Liver and Onions!

Review by Marcus

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Ah this was great. Been there! Different circumstance's but oh yea. :)

-Marcus

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5

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#4432964

Review of Inhuman

Review by Marcus

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

Great Story,

What can I say other than this was just simply awesome. I really enjoy war stories especially when its about life on the front line. The whole ride was great, from beginning to end. Also a great reveal towards the end there. My only complaint is that there was not more to read.

Marcus

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#4429911

Review of Ocean

Review by Marcus

Rated: E

| (2.5)

Hello Ty,

This was definitely a ride (pun intended). I was confused on a couple parts as it seemed like it became night time at 3 different occurrences. Also I didn't get the gobbled up part about the school. But other than that it flowed really well and it went quick, which made it seem like he was riding fast. A lot to like here but just some clearing up of why it became night so often or was he riding for days? But a great start for sure. I would like to read more.

Marcus

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#4429871

Review of Debts Unpaid

Review by Marcus

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hello JYO,

Very cool poem. Really makes you see what you are writing. I almost felt like I was at an old opera house listing to a Shakesperian actor say this aloud.

Good stuff

Marcus