This is a rather funny story but your right rats are a pain But you need 2 peices of advice I think here. One the story you need to rate because it has no rate on it and 2 Never shoot a rat with a BB Gun it only makes them mad it never harms them and it just stuns them, you need to get rat poison after them. Angela Michelle Adams.
This is a story I liked very much and in fact to be truthful a lot of things in my life are just like the story in my life from when I was little. I do not know if this is a true story I can say with out a dought in my mind what was seen was real You can still go to church and see things in life you have no way of exsplainning. I just chalk it up to god sending down angels to look out for us when he thinks we need a helping hand so I would not worry about it. But I did notice this has no rating on it so you might want to fix that but all and all I loved the story
This is very good Quite different from any thing I have seen in your port before but I must say it is very well done. Some times I wish I had a tallent to write like this and at other times I am not to sure how I feel about my writing ability But I must say the effert you put for to bring out what you are thinking with your writing at the time and not have to add much to get the point accross is something i encvy you having. I would much like to hear how one goes about doing this some time. Angela Michelle Adams.
Lady this is a very wise statment here and in fact I agree with it 100% and to show that I mean this I even challenge everyone to at least make one committment this year and stick with it specially the secret plane we came up with that if you do not remember the secret plan we talked about just write and ask me. But in all seriousness you got me to realizing with this I have had in my heart a while to make a committment to something and I think this is the year to start the ball rolling on it. Thanks for the help. Angela Michelle Adams. P.S. All I can say is look out world! LOL. I think you know the rest to that. LOL.
This is a very sweet poem here at Christmas time. Things like this are very emmotional for me no matter how big or small the telling of it is. This is the sort of thing that makes me wish at Christmas I had my own child to raise and spoil to the best of my ability. Great Job. Angela Michelle Adams.
I saw this and thought I would check it out and when I read it I thought you had wrote it very well. I am going to try and read more of your things as I can I think you are a very good writer and I encourage you to keep it up. I love everything I read and encourage everyone to keep on writing on the site that I read but for someone to put this sort of thought into a story when I can not think straight to put that much into a story I do I find it fasinatting that they can do it and I commend the efferts of it great job. Angela Michelle Adams.
When I read this I just sat for the longgest and remembered how it was when I was little and in fact a lot of what you bring up I did as a child but my Fondest Christmas memory was eather being at my Mom's mothers house at christmas time and eating dinner with her or having mom cook for all of us and everyone gathering at our house for dinner. I remember one year we made decorations like you describe in this story for our tree. I even remember the hardest christmas I ever spent while my grandma was alive and that was when I was in the hospital at christms and was flat on my back after having back surgery. I spent 9 and1/2 weeks in the hospital or there about and trust me I wished then I was at home doing all the things I used to do. that was the christmas of 81 and I was only 12 and trust me that was the lonliest christmas I had spent ever. This just proves you do not know what you have untill it is gone. Thanks for the reminder. I agree with you. I rather have family and tradition anyday than forget the true meaning of holidays. Angela Michelle Adams.
This survey I love and in fact I have wanted to do something like this survey for a while but just never have done it. Thanks for your interest in this. You did a very good job in doing this and a lot of more people should be willing to get to know us who are disabled instead of shying away from us. I am proud to be a part of this group. Angela Michelle Adams.
I read this over the weekend and loved it. I want to say I think this is a very good read. If some felt like this and heald to their faith the world I think would not be so messed up. You have done I think a very good job with this. I am thinking that it will not be long that others see the faith of holding on to their convictions soon. That to me is what makes us or breaks us in life and I think that is what this teaches us. Keep up the good work. Angela Michelle Adams.
This is the sweetest thing I have ever read in fact this gives me the reminder I have needed for a while now about life and the ways life can treat a person. I see many ways to interperatate this so in my minds eye this is what truly says why it is so great. If i can follow it and get many ideas from it and my mind not wander when I read that is to me the soul of a truly talented writer wheather it be a poem or story. Great Job. Angela Michelle Adams.
I love the Idea behind this and true to this list I have saw many of these people's writings and think they are very well deserving to be mentioned. I have thought of doing just such a thing in my port as well but just not had the time to do so because everytime I start to write or do anything on line latly life steps in and I do not get the chance to do so. I admire you for calling attention to the fine writers we have here on line. Angela Michelle Adams.
This picture to me is of a living doll and to me is as pretty as a picture and I can not help but want to post my review public to show this cutty pie off. I happen to have talked to this pretty thing over the phone and will tell you that she is as smart as she is pretty and anyone says different will have to answer to me. And maybe one day when she gets older you will a let her have her own port on line and I will take it upon myself to watch after her and see no one hurts her on line. That is if you let her have her own port some day and she wishes to be a part of our happy group. Angela Michelle Adams.
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