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Rated: E | (3.0)
Cute little poem, not sure the first paragraph adds to it.

Spelling mistakes -- bubbles, collapse
I think the word you are looking for may be sudsies, not suddies, could be wrong. :)

I would rethink 'each has it's own dimension', they are all 3D, or maybe 'each has it's own fractal dimension'?
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