I liked your poem. I especially liked the opening line: Rockets by Cape Canaveral. I actually went to "Space Academy" (Space Camp) down there. It was the best two weeks of my life. I actually got into the medical field because of my time spent down there. Thank you for sharing your poem.
Wow Calyx. What a heart felt poem. I enjoyed reading it. I like how you say that you will tread this path again. Your poem did make my heart feel heavy due to the unspoken death of a loved one. Very well done.
What a great poem. I can only imagine the noise these children make. I have two nephews that are seven and nine years old. I laughed reading the poem for all I could do is imagine my two nephews playing the drum set. Thank you for posting and sharing this poem.
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