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Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey Patty Mark said to check you out ,glad I did!!! Your poem flows so nice and fast!!!
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Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
GREAT HAIKUS!
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Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there Cynaemon,I will try it,but I have three questions,where are the bean sprouts, what is a brown onion and what about tomatoe sauce?How about Pork Italiano with green beans"LOL
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Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there Beedaboos,title "Out of Lead" cute poem.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Beherebook, you must of had a hellva contact high in the land of weed to have flashbacks.LOL Nice poem,well done!! I like that hearse in the catholic church,maybe they should take their wayward priests for a ride in the hearse? LOL
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Cyam Thankyou for saluting what we call in ny a cat bird,I don't know why,but the world knows we are nuts anyway.Will visit your port soon.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello there Luker my name Is Zeldar I'm an alien and I think you have the first two lines for ten human poems,very good lines,I know what I'm talking about because ,having personally observed human poets for the last 4000 years and talking to a lot of the them,in my human form, I learned quite a bit about Human Poetry.It Is almost as good as my poetry,almost.So work on those poems and If I can't visit you I will use the Internet to communicate with you.As you humans say,"Good Luck and 'Keep on Writing!!
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Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello there Robert,I feel the P O W E R,phalus!!LOL.Nicely done.Check out my poem "Start a New Day"
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Review of I need Him  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Bravo,Take a bow!!
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Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
When will it be finished?
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Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Where is chapter 4?
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Review of Sneeze  Open in new Window.
Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Elbaz,loved it.I ALMOST SNEEZED while reading it!
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Review of day at the ocean  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Sounds like you had as much fun writing it as doing it.
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Review of Mi vida negra  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Generique,I think you should make it a little longer. It borders on greatness!
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Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello There Kristopher,Thank You for the poem.It's very good.'I already know I will soar" Love those two lines!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Ashley,Great poem,keep on writing.
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Review of Wonder  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello There Lady D,very origional.Single i should be capitalized.You have a good start,let's see more soon!!
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Review of Is There a God?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You raise some good points.You missed one good one though?God is not from this earth,therefore he is an Alien,which brings up the exisitence of God's(aliens in charge of one or two planets)who are monitoring their lab experiments?You need to use spell check! Keep writing Rain fairy!
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Review of To save a life?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Manabanski,I was actually climbing the cliff with him.Wow!! I think you should combine some of those smaller paragraphs into just a few big paragraphs.In the third paragraph last sentence;"He was staring the red horizon".It should read "He was staring at the horizon".I was crying too.Thank you and keep on writing
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello There Solace Bring, hope you brought an explaination of the poem to me for I'm totally lost. Not your fault,I just woke up.Poem Is flawless.PLEASE REPLY STAT(IMMEDIATELY).
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Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
LOLx 100,00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 I never laughed so hard in my life thank you.I am dying to find out about John's missing 6 1/2 page flashback.You correct the darn thing! The tears are running down my face,my glasses are fogging up and I have to run to the bathroom before I pi_ _ on myself. Read it slowly you'll catch the errors ,a few typo's acouple grammar mistakes.My wife read it and howled,she had to go to the bathroom also.Saturday Night Live in NYC would love to hire you as a comedy writer and try the comedy contests on this site.
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Review of Intake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello There.I like the structure of both poems.Well done.
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Review of Intake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello There.I like the structure of both poems.Well done.
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Review of Roasted Wood  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
HI There TS, very beautiful and quite accurate.I was there in the fall of 71. We had a BERLINERWEISER and each had a Bratwurst right off the outside grill,God that was good.Keep on keeping on! OH Yeah,I'm still a smokerand the one thing I didn't like about
Germany was that they charged you for a book of matches ONE PFENNING I think!thank you for the memories!!
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Review by Wordeater Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
HI There very cute.The microwave is dead.LONG LIVE SPARKY!!
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