A wonderful adventure. I liked the characters, especially when they interacted in a very human way, such as when Rose suggested protecting Lucy when she was scared, it made me more connected to the story.
At first, I thought that this was going to be a horror story, as you mentioned the year 1902, an old abandoned mine and kids, but It then turned into fantasy as I read more and I liked the sense of adventure and exploration.
Keep it up!
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