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Review of Thru The Dark  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Hello shaggypane

To walk in darkness takes internal light. I know I have had a long journey in darkness. Funny how only minute to minute I was able to make my way. I love the flow of your words and the deep meaning behind them. Without prayer would it even be possible to rejoice?

Write on!
Michelle
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Review of d:) =|--=  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Tysonroyal,

I am not really sure what your so happy about but hey, I'm just glad that you feel like sharing it. I have never been good with the symbols but I get the wee effect just fine.

Welcome to Writing.com and what else are you willing to share? Creative writing can come in so many forms!

Write on!

Michelle
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Review of Walks in life  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jimminycritic Author IconMail Icon

I have to say your title caught my attention but the meloncoly flow of your words grabbed my attention. What is it about journeys of the soul? We can discover so much when we travel alone but we need to be a part of something bigger to feel accepted. Like our own journey is worth it. We have to believe in our own faith before we can take on others.

I am really glad I stopped over to read this. Thanks for sharing your walk and also for helping me with the Paper Dolls. I feel better knowing I am leaving it with someone I really trust.

Thank you for everything....and just what side of the country do you live in Michigan? I'm stuck in the middle. LOL

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi BScholl Author IconMail Icon

Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.

I Judge on the following three items:

1. Follow the prompt. I almost think your image should go after the story, cuz I was expected her to be young first but you have it reversed and that is very interesting. I like the way the image is a reflection of a dream as well...clever.


2. Easy to Read. I had to read this several times and I am still scratching my head over the ending...something about the fingertips gives me chills and did she forget that she had that dream before or that she is grown up? It's kind of confusing but maybe that is how you want it. It makes you think.


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. Nothing stands out as an error and I did enjoy reading your take on the image prompt. Thank you and good luck in the contest.



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Review of Climax  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Ken,

Where on the earth do you get your talent and wisdom? You have to know this touches me deeply. I love this kind of womanly power but she lost her value in all her perfection. What an amazing story you have here in poetry form. It really makes me wish I had your talent. I admire your poetry and writing.....A LOT!

I know you like praise but dang, even I am getting bummed out! lol Wait, I am not like this woman at all, cuz I know and can appreaciate the goodness in my life and that is having friends like you and enjoying your talent. Thanks again for bidding on my package reviews. I have enjoyed my little escape into your port. I miss my time here!!

Take care and best to you always!!
Hugs & Love,
Michelle
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Review of Masquerade  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hey Ken,

This has to be a bonus for both of us! Man, this was great. I could not only see her but feel your passion as well. I loved the excitement of it and the ending of finally being able to connect without the games but the reality of what just happened. Man I love sex and I also love romance when you can get both at the same time, you are getting the good stuff! I am happy I found this. Thanks for sharing your writing talent. Now you really have pissed me off a poet and this too! You can wrap me in ribbons anytime! lol

Write on my talented friend!!
Hugs,
Michelle
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Review of Admonitions  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ken,

I know you won my package of poetry reviews, but to be honest...I don't know what auction this is from or how many I am suppose to gift you. I am betting it was 5. *Smile* That is my normal package. LOL

So now about this warming going on. We are fools to think Mother Nature is not speaking to us! She is changing the planet earth and we just sit here on our butts ordering iced coffee! Would our moms have ever drank iced coffee? LOL
I love the message in your words and I hate the word goodbye!!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.

I Judge on the following three items:

1. Follow the prompt. To take a picture prompt and bring into it emotions is what I am looking for! I love the way this drew me in and kept my interest. I'm such a sucker for emotional writing and this was deep and beautiful.


2. Easy to Read. I loved it. You did a great job of setting up the storyline and developing the characters.


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. Great Job and Thank you so much for your story. I am sorry for the delay in getting this reviewed. I promise to have the results of the contest by the end of the month!


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Review of Faded Hearts  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)

Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.

I Judge on the following three items:

1. Follow the prompt. I love the twist of ages in this story. What a fun way of using the picture prompt. Great character development.


2. Easy to Read. Easy to read and an enjoyable and timely tale.


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. Great job I truly enjoyed your writing! Good Luck in the contest!



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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Sun*Hi Again Bill,

Okay I Love Haikus but I am not sure I get the modern form...still I just wrote about wanting to be a willow tree and I can see some of her charm in your words. It's amazing to me how something like a tree can be imagined into a symbol of something more then the orginal. Crativity at it's best. Thank you for sharing your talent!


I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Sun*Hi Khaki,

I have some bubbles with me and I am glad I found you highlighted with Showering Acts of Joy, I wanted to come visit your port. I had to laugh at the wisdom here and the humor. It's true we are all on some kind of path, it might not get us to the right place at the right time but it will get us someplace, as long as we keep moving forward!


I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review:
I think you have so many undercurrents here in this story, it feels so unfinished to me. These woman have a history and something to do with saving the next planet might make them friends again if that is even possible. Interesting concept and nicely written. Is there more to this?


Write on!
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Review of Meeting Him  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1 Author IconMail Icon

Okay I had to come back and see what else you held in your port, but this caught me by surprise and I so expected you to be sitting next to Jesus and I honestly think you might have been, as I often think of him as Santa! What a great way you have with spinning a tale in poetry form. Great job! Thanks for sharing your vision.

Write on!
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Review of The Jester  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sum1 Author IconMail Icon

What I like about the Jester is the open truth here about life. How we give for other's without realizing the "behind' the sceens feelings of our own insecurity. You have so many emotions and images dancing in this poem, I can see and feel it. I love poetry that inspires me. Thank you for sharing the jester.

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Review of Amour  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon Author IconMail Icon

Does the heart protect itself in flight? I wonder if it can!!!! I love the image and how true your words ring in my heart and ears. Like a bird the heart goes were it can fly freely...No set pattern or direction, it just goes!

Wonderful poem and thank you for sharing it. As always I love to read your poetry.

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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Abby Russel Author IconMail Icon

Wow this captured my attention. I loved the opening line....can we only be together in death? What an interesting dream and is this the start of a book you are writing? I can see this being developed into something more. I like the emotional set up. I think this line did confuse me...She swam out to her, all Did you mean he?

Thanks for sharing and write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello bobsbaby

Oh man I can feel this, I get it and I totally understand the childs walls, I have been on both sides of this poem. For what girl hasn't? LOL Our mothers direct is in ways unseen but always felt with the heart. Great emotion and vision in your words. I bet you made mom cry!

Thanks for sharing!
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Review of Excuse me, who?  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello JCBWrite Author IconMail Icon

So do we keep laughing because we are overwhelmed with guilt? Or do we keep laughing because we think, it will never happen to US? I wonder and I like poetry that makes me think and this is eye opening and thoughtful stuff. Great job, I can offer no suggestions for improvement so you get 5 happy stars from me!

Write on!
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Review of For An Angel  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Sherri,

This is stunning and so heartfelt. I feel horrible that I didn't know her better! We never grab a hold of all the blessings we are shown!!

I did notice that you have one typo...Those who knew here were truly blessed.
Did you mean her?

Love you!
Michelle
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Review of Capitive  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SassySweet Author IconMail Icon

What I love and adore about poetry is when it can transport me to a romantic thought of my own...When I can feel something and this makes me dream big time and I have poetry like this. Emotions are strong my only suggestion would be to edit the line spacing, I think you could do with less and still have the same effect.

Welcome and keep on loving! Don't wait foreve when you can love NOW!
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Review of Black Moon  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello and welcome Daedric Prince Chaean Author IconMail Icon

This sounds like an opening line to another vampire movie. What is going on is just a descrption but what is missing is the emotional pain that comes with this kind of fearful talk, something seems to be missing but I don't know what it is..it's like you disconnected from your words. I say it's a great try but I bet you can do better, keep working on it.

Write on!
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Review of Change  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello and welcome Art Author IconMail Icon

Change is something that happens, sometimes your paying attention and other times it just occurs. I like to make things change. I want to constantly improve myself and express myself and that is why I love poetry and self-expression! I hope life gets you what you want. It will change so you might as well accept it!
Write on!

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Review of I'm Sorry (Again)  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello emerson george Author IconMail Icon

What the heart can never do is plan well! When it loves all good intentions go flying out the door. I think everyone can relate to this horrible fate of reality. Sometimes we just don't get as lucky in love as we should! Pure proof that we should never give up or stop looking for love, cuz when it is right nothing else can compare!

Thanks for sharing!
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Review of We Knew Best  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Eric Eden Author IconMail Icon

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review:
We knew best that pain likes company. I get that loud and clear in this poem and also such an empty feeling of acceptance. Why do we treat ourselves so harshly for our emotions? We have growing pains but this one is very hard to read. I get it. Empty is really standing out in this poem for some reason. Maybe you have something else here and I am missing it. Not sure. Poetry is so subjective. Thanks for sharing!


Write on!
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Review of Hard to Let Go  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Jonalyn Author IconMail Icon

What happens when it ends? It's not simple to go on and repair the broken feelings and damage done to the psyche. Sometimes we are strong and other times we will never be. It's all in balance in our heart. I only have one suggestion I am not an editor but your present tense seems to be off some, I believe it should be look what happened now? Thanks for sharing it was your title that caught my attention.

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