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Review of The Honey Bucket  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey Stinky Ken,

What a fun place to land on your last poetry review from your winning package. The honey pot! LOL

I am so sure that many kids have told this story and you really did fall in? Or should I say jump in? Oh man...This is yucky and funny. What I love about your writing is that you can take me on the journey with you. You bring your youth back and a laugh with your colorful words. I am just glad this is a time I don't want to smell ya. I keep thinking of your poor mother!!!! *Smile*
Thanks for bringing me joy and please always bid on my packages, you know I adore reading your poetry. Oh okay, you shouldn't have to pay me!! LOL

Love ya,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi 🌖 HuntersMoon Author IconMail Icon

You have highlighted my biggest dream in this poem. I feel so much of my life is missing when my parents died and I lost my connection to the "older" generation. The respect I see missing in today's society scares me at times. Yet, I do see random acts of kindness too. It seems we need so much more. Your wisdom and words hit the target of my heart today with this poem. Simple words like Thank you seem so small. You have a piece of my heart in yours.

Write on!
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Review of Dark Music  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon Author IconMail Icon

Now this one goes deep! I so get that she has a serious need to feel that dark music. I get that her bones are on fire. Oh I love reading something and falling right into the words. You have an amazing way of taking a prompt and bringing so much life into the poem. In many ways, she is the vampire not him...I like that!! I am so living that last line, Choices that can't be undone. Yikes!!

You are my hero!!
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Review of Vision Quest  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Brother 🌖 HuntersMoon Author IconMail Icon

I knew you couldn't stay away from PI! LOL...

Something about this image makes it so amazing to write a poem about. So much is happening and you can really feel the spirit of her and the words that you chose. I do agree the journey is just beginning when we get that kind of enlightenment. We have to do something with the wisdom, we have to share it and give back. Thank you for always putting so much feeling into your words.

You rock!
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Review of Life's Dreams  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Sammie Author IconMail Icon

This is the kind of poetry I like to read. It flows like the dream, full of energy, movement and an awakening of the soul. Funny how our body responds to the environment and our mind puts the play together in dreams. I am up late because I can not sleep. Too funny to find this poem. Perhaps I should find a better blanket! Thanks for sharing your dreams.

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello dollzell Author IconMail Icon

Oh this is so tender and sweet and so sad as well. I have so many footprints on my heart. I have roads that are deeply covered with lovers feet. It is the story of my life. Not everyone we are destined to be together forever, but once the memories are formed they are impossible to forget. Wonder and may your heart always be open for more footprints.

Write on!
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Review of I am an orphan  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Bacia Saggezza Author IconMail Icon

When my parents died 29 days apart...my sisters kept saying we were orphans. Let's just say at age 38, I really didn't feel that way. I felt sad, hurt and lost. But to be an orphan I felt I had to be a child and I wasn't that. I was a mother and wife and now years have gone by and at times I do feel like an orphan, but over time you plant your own tree and you learn that once you were strong enough to stand without them. It is all a matter of time and the of life going on.

I hope you know you are that strong plant!
Grow!

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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon

I went and posted this on the Activities page so you can get more donations. I think this is wonderful that you want to celebrate your birthday with an Auction and to donate to your favorite groups. You are so sweet and I love the colorful page set up! Thank you for sharing so much of your time and energy here!

Write on!
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Review of Hold On  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello jib_4ever

To hold on to something or someone is a big deal. Some times even the strongest bond can not keep that hold. This is a very emotional and strong poem. I love the feeling and the giving of self. You have your hands out. I hope the other person knows how lucky they are to have you. Never give up on what you believe in. Love is great!

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Ken,

Thank you for your entry in the Paper Doll Short Story Challenge.

I am honored to judge this contest and find it so fun to see what creative words can come from a picture prompt.

I was hoping the little guy would drive away in the car, but he wasn't so lucky. He was a myth? You think? Okay, you got me with the play on words and his golden arm. Clever writing dear one, you actually went to some trouble to get your legends in order. Sham Rock...You slay me! Thanks and I hope the rest of the judges are just as impressed as I am. Happy Go Green!*Wink*


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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Retsced Author IconMail Icon

You have nailed my personality to the wall here! I so get the confusion and the mask. I also live in this place that I pretend everything is filled with my love and I can never get hurt! Oh how I wish that was true! Life is best lived when we are honest, inside and out. If we take the time to own and believe in our emotions, we learn to trust ourself better. You have all the makings here of great wisdom and I am glad I read this. I can offer no suggestions to make this better. Only that you keep expressing and sharing your heart and own your emotions. Don't ever let anyone determine your worth. It is priceless!

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Star*Hi~ Santa Sisco ~ Author IconMail Icon

It's my pleasure to offer you a Showering Acts of Joy review, look we both belong to the same group! LOL
You know your write good English for not being from the USA. LOL

I Love a friendly welcome and your port introduction is great. I am not one on spy stuff but I do love poetry and I am so glad that Writing.com has inspired you. I tell ya, I love this place and you being part of it, is just one more reason to celebrate. Thank you for the warm welcome and I better go sign your guest book now!

Enjoy the Shower!
Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Star*Hello Fyn Author IconMail Icon

I am back with one more Showering Acts of Joy Review! I had to read this! I love the eye catching title but to think you wrote this for a friend is even nicer. If your words jump off the page, I can't imagine what your friends must have done! I love the image of the summer ripe tomato. Makes me want summer all the more! Great words strung together! Thank you for sharing!

I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Star*Hello Fyn Author IconMail Icon
It is my pleasure to offer you a Showering Acts of Joy review!

What an awesome adventure! I don't know which one I liked better, Sarah or Sara's. LOL. I am in awe of this kind of writing and I love to travel out west. It is something! Your right, we have no mountains in Michigan. What a shame that we don't!! Your ending was so unexpected. I just assumed she would make it safely home. That would have been my happy ending. Still, I admire this kind of creative touch and leaving it the way you did add so much more to the mystery of it. Great job. I cannot think of anything to improve this great story. Thanks so much for sharing your traveling heart.

I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Joseph Whitworth Smith Author IconMail Icon

Nothing beats a happy ending in a story for me! I can hear your laugh all the way to the bank! What an interesting write. I have to say, I love having my chart done and learning about signs. It's fun to think of all the possiblities that are available if you open up your mind and think. I don't mess with the IRS because they don't mess with me. I can see how human error can cloud up this issue. I am happy you got the results you deserve.

Write on!
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Review of Canyons of Light  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Thank you for your entry in this months "Rising Stars Shining Brighter" Open in new Window. I have never looked at a city as a cave. However, if you are standing on the moon, looking down...It very well could represent what you are talking about. You have a way of taking something so simple and making it complex, beautiful and interesting. Thank you for that and good luck in the contest this month!



Hugs,
Michelle
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Review of Echoes  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello LadyGreyWalker Author IconMail Icon

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review: Wow! Talk about a poem with soul. I love this! It talks about so much of the power of a love, of a calling and human need. What this means to me is something I have often felt but the voice is not my own. I wonder just why we let the voices go. Thank you for giving me something to think about. Great!!


Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello KristieS Author IconMail Icon

When we love someone and they die, they never really leave us. Esp if you had a strong bond and it sure sounds like you had a great friendship. When someone shows us the best of every day, we are indeed blessed. Thank you for sharing what I am sure is a very sad emotional moment in your life. The heart never stops loving!

Write on and welcome to Writng. com!
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Review of Master  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello April Desiree Author IconMail Icon

What I find so interesting with this poem, is how confused I am following it. I get the hurt feeling. I understand that you were treated poorly, that part I get. Perhaps it is the wording, the way that you ask questions but leave very little punctuation. In many ways I get this but to be honest, I like poetry that is clearer. It's just a personal preferance it's that last life I just don't get it. Well, don't let me stop you. Keep writing and sharing.

Write on!
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Review of Betrayal  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Just call me Omni Author IconMail Icon

If you have been by Shellyville and read any of my recent poetry, you would know this poem stabs me in the heart. I am standing in this poem. I am surrounded by skeletons and not just empty trees. This is so deep and strong with imagery. I love it because of the emotions I am also able to feel from your words. To me that is the perfect kind of poetry. Thank you so much for giving me so much to think about with your words. In vain!

Write on!
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This concludes your winning package and I am working on that *Peace* bracelet. *Wink*
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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Just call me Omni Author IconMail Icon

Wow what a great idea, I know this is not an official poetry review like I promised, but after reading this, I just had to send you a Public Review! I think spreading joy and positive energy is what keeps me glued to Writing.com. I think we have a wonderful and unique group of writers here. It makes me smile every day and to think we are all connected by a smile Hello.

I hope you continue to share for a very long time! Thanks for making me smile!

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Review of Wind Whisperer  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Just call me Omni Author IconMail Icon

This is review 1 of the 3 I owe you. *Smile*

I am so glad I was able to find this highlighted on The First People's Poetry Page. I have to say, I am in awe of the message of your words, I think it is the plea for peace. The whole image is so strong. We are indeed lucky to graced with such giving spirits. Thanks for sharing your talent and so much more!

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Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Grateful Jess Author IconMail Icon

Thank you for sharing this poem. It hurts to read this. It hurts because it makes the life of something so innocent turn out so evil. I get the whole entire message and I love the story telling style of your poem and words. I am so glad they are going to publish this. It is a great reminder. Keep sharing your wisdom!

Write on!
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Review of The Atom's Heart  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon

Thank you for allowing me to give you a "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.review:

I so admire poetry that can make me think and I can see something with the words, you go beyond that with this image and feeling. I am sad by this poem, but also so amazed at the power of the words and the white sand. It makes me think of what life is valued at, why do we use science to hurt? I have much to think about, thank you for sharing your wisdom.

Write on!
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Review of Spamonnaise  Open in new Window.
Review by ShellySunshine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello bilwilcox

Thank you for allowing me to give you a "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.review,

Oh I am laughing out loud! What a creative and scary image you have put into my head. I so love Thanksgiving...but I might never be able to look at spam or a turkey the same ever again! Thanks for sharing your funny bones!

Write on!
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I'm surprised this doesn't have a brown ribbon, green seems to healthy! *Laugh*
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