Tivoi's (minitank) Reviews

Tivoi

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15 Public Reviews Given

15 Total Reviews Given

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#3829172

Review of Lust.

Review by Tivoi

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

The whole poem sounded well. The imagine of an angel bleeding onto a grave is the image that stuck in my head. The details were very nice. Overall a great poem.

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#3829161

Review of Means so much

Review by Tivoi

Rated: E

| (3.0)

The lines reconnecting with thee and such sweet ecstacy sound well together. Very emotional.

3

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#3829157

Review of Hopelessness

Review by Tivoi

Rated: E

| (4.0)

The poem sounds dark compared to being a long wait. The details were good.

4

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#3829152

Review of Come Back To Me

Review by Tivoi

Rated: E

| (3.5)

The emotions were there a little bit, More work could of been done to have more details in it.

5

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#3825520

Review of Vulpes Vulpes

Review by Tivoi

Rated: E

| (3.5)

The descriptive features of the fox are very creative. Describing the intelligent creature of the fox. The ryhme scheme also works well with the poem.

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#3825513

Review of The Life

Review by Tivoi

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A deep meaning behind this poem, I love the lines "Love they say is one, To love one needs life" Nice poem.

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#3825509

Review of Trapped

Review by Tivoi

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

The imagery of her clothes created a realistic look to me. The word choice are nice and profound.

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#3825501

Review of Horror/Slasher Cliches

Review by Tivoi

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

I would love to help you write one.

9

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#3825473

Review of :Dead Earth Chapter II:Damned Future:

Review by Tivoi

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

The futuristic background of this story, made me want to read it even more. The wording and imagery is there. I would love to see a short movie created after this. Nice job.

10

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#3817542

Review of Selfless Bastard

Review by Tivoi

Rated: E

| (4.0)

The description of fear is very clear. An improvement would be that there would be more imagery in the part where a person is looking into the mirror at themselves.