I love the idea of this interactive! It's still a work in progress, but I think it'll turn out great! I think you should make more interactives like this one, because you made this one really well. Hope you don't mind that I added a few additions to your interactive, sorry if they aren't very good. I'm kinda new to this writing stuff >.< Good job, and keep up the great work!
I love the idea of two people who never knew each other becoming close friends in an unexpected way! This is a great read, and for your first story, I'd say it's a really good start. The amount of dialouge keeps the reader interested, but I personally would've liked more details about their surrounds aka colours, sizes, textures, etc. Overall, Great job!!!
Oh Cynthia is a great short story, one that you should be proud of as a beginner. I would suggest looking into writing classes, so you could improve that vocabulary of yours. Other than that, I wouldn't change a thing. Marvelous work!
I really love this short story/poem of yours. It has an interesting take on pokemon, bringing love into the fandom too. It's kinda sad, too. Haruka sorta likes Satoshi, but she knows that their just friends. Kasumi is the one that he was giving the poem to, yet I feel like those two could become more than friends. I guess it's kinda like forbidden love, or when somebody you love likes someone else. Overall, I love this story. 5 stars :3
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