You connect with anyone who has ever loved someone so deeply. I really liked your poem, it is very intense and "visual" meaning you can atually see and feel every word being said. you can feel the fingers run through hair and you can see their face when your eyes open. I like to read things were I can actually connect with on any level. I feel that anyone can connect with this poem. Very good and very passionate. Keep it up.
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