hey, i rather enjoyed those words. but i feel strongly that you should write more, add on to this creative poem. i would love that, but it is only a suggestion!!
i am going to read more!!
this is you??????? so many obsticals and journeys. you seem to have been through it all, though life is always to short. with these words i seem to know you just a little better, if that is at all possible. to me, it is.
words for gold and silver! these were!
your words, right now they leave me speechless, for they are so true, yet so beautifully written. i am so happy that you adding so many more, for i love to read them all.
were you a soldier Master L?????? if you were not that you do understand what it meant, for this poem is perfect. and i was touch by these words. and again i have to thank you for willingly sharing your words.
oh, that could not have been more beautiful and dazziling. this is my new favorite poem that you have wrote, and the love that you felt for this person is so evadent that it would take an idiot to miss. that was stunning, thank you!
assasinations. yes we all do lose someone dear, and your words explain that so truly. i have a special place in my heart for this poem and the one about 9-11.
you are a beautiful writer, thanks to that magical pencil you use.
to tell you the truth i have no ides why other people have not rated this, for i loved it.
i love how the first stanza you were young and free, but in the last stanza you both were old and yourselves. i think that this was beautifully written, and like i said before, people would not know TRUE poetry if it stuck them in the eyes!
thank you for telling me about 'Remember' for i enjoyed reading it much!
i do, i smell it all, and one of my favorite smell is freshly cut grass. but every line put a vivid picture in my head that i loves and they were perfect and so . . . . . right . . . .
just like summer. you are an amazing writer and i look forward to reading more!!
so beautiful yet so touching. i love the words the you choose, for you are the only one that i have found who has shown my a variety.
you are the real deal when it comes to writing and you should try to get all of these out into the world, for i am sure that others will love and appreciate your words as much as i do.
i remember that day to. so sad and frightning, and devastating. i have a brother in law that is being shipped out to iraq in a few days and he is going to be gone for another year. im scared for him, but he is doing his duty and i know that. i give all my thanks and love to the soldiers over seas.
thank you so very much for those touching words.
why did you make it so short??????? i liked what i read, but i wish that you would write more, you know add more to the poem. keep in mind that this is only a suggestion and im not downing you work, but i really, honestly this that you good and i'd like to see more. heres something positive, i liked your word choice . . . .
JUMPING and BLOOMING. i enjoy words like that!!!!!!!!!!!
WOW. that was so deep, and . . . . well . . . . . just so powerful. i dont know how you do it, but your words touch me so strongly. in a way that i could not explain with 100 words. i dont know what to say, but i can tell you this: i love to read what you write.
and i cant wait for more!!!
WOW> that was so . . . . well i do not know what to say . . . . it was so amazing . . .
powerful . . . . touching . . . . . mind grabbing . . . . and so so so much more great things like that. you are a fantastic writer and one of my top favorites on this site.
thank you for being a writer!!!!!!!!!!!
those are the most encouraging words and i think that every body needs to hear them sometimes . . . . i know that i do!!!!!!! altogether this was a good story and i thank you for telling me about it, for you are a great writer . . . . !!!!!!! please tell me when you write more cause i would like to read them ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!! :o
i love it so much!!!!!!!!! this remindes me of my fav. book TWILIGHT . . . . and that is a really good thing too!!!!!! i did enjoy this and i loved the picture that i got in my head!
you are a powerful writer and i love that!!!!!!
ha, that was clever and very good . . . . i enjoyed reading this, and it was so different than other poems that i have read lately!!!!!!!!! these words were fun!!!!!!!
KEEP IT UP!!!!!! CAUSE YOU ARE REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! >_<
OH that was the best poem that i have read all day long. it was so strong, so powerful, and so intense. i'll add you to my fav. authors list right now.
OH, so very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is my favorite one by you so far!!!!!!! but im sure that there will be more!!!!!! at least i hope!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved the words that you chose and they flowed do smoothly. you are one of the best!!!!! i have to say >_<
just the perfect words to make me feel joy and hope!!!!!!! for a short poem that was really, really, really . . .. . . ... . . . .WELL . . . . . . . . .amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please keep up the work . . . . . . i'd like to see more from you, thats for sure!!!!!!!!!!!!!
there are a few mistakes but this was really good none the less. the words were so correct and just . . . . right!!!!!!! keep up the great work and i hope to see more from you in the future!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you are so good . . . . . .good at captivating my mind and soul!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you work, well it is just so good and amazing and so many other things. keep up the writing, for your one of the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i dont know if it is just me, but it seems that every single poemi read, i end up loving, and you are no exception. this was so . . . . so PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the words flowed right off the page and into my mind in a way thati can not describe!!!!!! i like your work . . . . . . and like i've said a thousand times this week . . .
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!! cause you are really good.
i love the way that you have set this poem up!!!!!!! and the poem was fantastic i have to say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so your scottish?????????? i have some scottish in my blood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but back to the poem, i was so smooth, so perfect. i sounded so beautiful as i read i over again the second and third time.................. keep writing, for this poem was beyond good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
again this was so short yet so mind gripping. i have to thank you for that!!!! you are one fantastic writer!!!!!!! you words reach out to me in a way that i can not explain, they are so powerful yet so explanatory and so . . . . . .
just so RIGHT!!!!!!!!! thanx for being a writer, yet again to you!!!
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