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Review by Nathan Peterson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Thank you for starting this story, in my opinion it has potential! The plot, thus far, has not been exposed which is nice--i'll have to watch for more posts--and some good imagry.

The only things I see wrong thus far is the technical side. Everyone's style is different, so take it or leave it.

1) Use double spaces between your paragraphs. This makes it a little easier to read on a computer screen.

2) Careful with your spelling. You have a 'witch' where you obviously meant 'which'

Excellent! Keep up the good work, and post more :)
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Review by Nathan Peterson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello, and thank you for writing this amusing story. However, I would not have put in the horror/scary department.

I found it to be well written and fairly amusing! I am wondering where you had the ideas for the dandilions and the walrus' to be the first to go.

I liked that you had the main character stable throughout the whole story, and not freaking out like the rest of the world.

Anyways, keep up the good work!
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