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I look at the fun factor.
I'm good at...
Knowing what sells and Knowing what is good are my skills.
Favorite Genres
Murder mysteries.
Least Favorite Genres
Long sad stories.
Favorite Item Types
Murder She Wrote, Columbo and NCIS.
Least Favorite Item Types
Sad, tragic endings.
I will not review...
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Review of Conscapsis Theory  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"The Theory of Conscapsis is still in its early stages,
and there is no scientific evidence to support it."
Where do all the dead homeless people go?
Where do all the dead junkies go?
Once the brain is dead, what is left?
I hate to be a downer on death...

There is a beginning and an end.

That's my two cents for the ferryman.

Bob County
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
"Demon" means knowledge giver.
When I was a boy, I spoke into the summer night window.
I would sit by the window and breath in time to the wind.
After a while, I believed I was causing the wind to blow.
I convinced myself that the wind would bend the sycamore limbs to my breath.
I was a spooky child.

Nice poem.

Bob County
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Let me get this straight the new puppy is a Husky male: Max...
Bellah is an eight-week-old Australian Sheperd female.
And Bellah wants to play with the Husky male: Max.
But you want to train Max...
This is all happening in the middle of a blizzard.

My dad would adopt dogs and I would end up walking them.
Do these pups know potty training?
In a blizzard it would be difficult to take them for a walk.
I would paper train them.

You've a well written slice of time.

Bob County
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Review of Cobweb Dust  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)

I remember reading Eger Alan Poe in grammar school.
Then there was the dreaded Spanish and French classes.
That dates me.

Your poem reminded me of simpler problems.
Where does the universe come from?
Is there something after the Big Bang?
I don't know.

Nevertheless, you have a lovely style.

Bob County
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ha-ha!
Wizards and mirrors are always evil...
"Mirror upon with wall.
Tell me which is the fairest of them all."
The use of language is fun...
Is it medieval?
And there are three heroes.
Reminds me of the three little pigs.
You know wicca isn't evil.
It is how it is used.

Bob County
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Review of Becoming.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)


The bass?
I am not musical, but it sounds like she wanted more from the bass.
I don't understand ambition...
What is the bass?
Is this an erotic instrument for her?
If you live with a musician do they play a lot at home?
A lot of the bass is rubbing...

Bob County
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Apocrypha is the word for this thread.
Who will be our Saviour?
And what will save us?
Jesus talked about world peace for those who followed him.
Those who did not follow Jesus were dead to him(Luke 19:27).
Either you are with him or against him...
Funny that Androntrimax spells know as "no."
Yes or no is always the question.

Just my two cents for the ferryman.

Bob County
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Rated: E | (5.0)


It looks like Jake gut his come uppings.
The hero always gets screwed...
I sorry about Jake, but that's is the hero's story.
Wouldn't it be lovely if the Pale ones weren't bad?
What if Jake saw the Pale ones and learned they were good?
Just my thoughts...

Nice yarn!

Bob County
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Coma? Jesus is a nice idea.
Luke 19:27 Jesus states, "But for these enemies of mine,
who did not want to reign over them, bring them here and
slaughter them before me."
I like the Sermon on the Mount, but to not like Luke 19:27.
Wasn't Eve punished with menstruation and child birth for choosing Original Sin?
Why did perfect Adam listen to Eve?

We had a girl, who cut herself on the Mcdonald's window.
We told her she would be fired if she did that at work again.
She wore long sleeves...

If you have found true happiness, then more power to you.


Bob Country
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Review of The Supremes  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hmf? Are you sure?
I don't want to force a woman to give birth.
However, I love babies.
I think the Supreme Court is silly.
However, someone has to decide what is law.
I like Jesus.
But, Luke 19:27 "slaughter my enemies" is too much for me.
Politics is about money...
I guess I a freethinker.

Bob County
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm not a poet.
I know what I like.
The "Pit and swallowing" are solid messages.
A woman is a pit and swallowing wrongs.
Think about all the sins that have passed a woman's lips.
Are they sins to her?
I often wondered if a lady can be so kind.
Your poem touched my heathen heart.

Bob County
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What was that statue that foretold the end of humanity?
There were allot of them.
The problem is over population.
Poor people make more babies.
China rewards male children, so they have a shortage of females.
This is what your poem is getting at...
We need more constructive people.

Nice poem.

Bob County
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sounds good like egg fu Yung.
The problem with religion is which one?
Eternity is a long time.
What will you do?
Will you forget yourself?

Just my coin for the ferryman.

Bob County

PS. Maybe, we will never die?
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Oh, my.

Why do you think all our large arrays have been offline?
Is something the astronomers don't want the public to know?
Anunnaki are coming.
There is a nineth planet, and it is coming very close to Earth.
Put a paper bag over your head and lye on the floor.
That might be a blessing.

Nice yarn, but you are helpless.

Bob County
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Why do I question everything?
I guess I like to judge...
Watchers reminds me of the angels that watched Adam and Eve.
That is why God created them.
They taught Adam and Eve how to survive.
This giant, Yanica is a judge.
I ask why? But that would be judging God.
It is what it is.
That's a fun read!

Bob County
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very well written.
I like witches.
My mother and sisters dabbled.
But I digress.
You drew me in, and I want to know more.
Most of the so-called witches were midwives in the Middle Ages.
This is a fun read.

I hope I helped.
I am a little prejudice.

Bob County
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Review of Numb  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Numb, tisn't.
I like the reference to Eger Allen Poe.
He had an addiction to opium.
But he could write about numbness.
God, I love a good poem.

Bob County
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Very good.
The terrible truth is that we are all going to die.
I think therefore Am I?
What is this ghost in the machine?
Maybe, it is all an illusion?
How can we keep "Bruno" out?
Is our alter ego evil?
Lenard Nemoy said, "Death is the loss of consciousness."
Is that what we all fear?

Bob County
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Review of Filestron  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like it.
I have wondered why we live and die.
It seems like a terrible waste of time.
Nevertheless, it is fun to read about Filestron.
Eternity is a long time.
Prehaps Filestron lives on in our tenaciousness.
How long can you play a harp?
Or, how long can you play with vestal virgins?
How many leaves have fallen?
How many will fall?
Before there are no more leaves?

Bob County
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Rated: E | (5.0)
So the point is no point?
I guess that is the point...
What is three plus three?
Why do we care?
We need structure... No?

I think maybe that's true...
If we don't want structure.
Then, we are screwed... Yes?
I hope so...
Let all remember the butterfly.

It is a bug.


Bob County
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


A beautiful poem.
So much of our time is lost.
And we forget what was lost.
I know I will not recover it.
But hope springs eternal.

Bob County
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hearsay testimony is very tricky.
Are you familiar with Fatima?
There was a lot of rain there...
And then the sun appeared to come down and dry everyone off.
It was considered to be a manifestation of the Virgin Mary by many witnesses.
But, could it have been a close encounter with alien aircraft?
Will never know.

Bob County
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Can something come from nothing?
Some say yes and others say no.
I don't know... But, I hope there is love.
Joseph Ben Joseph, son of Joseph; Jesus.
We do not have the original Gospels.
All of the Gospels are translations.
We do not have Jesus' original Gospel.
The Sermon on the Mount was a compilation of Sumerian Gospels.
But, it's a good sermon...
Do you want to do good?
Have you helped someone?
That is what life is for, I hope.

Bob County
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A cute cuddly topic.
We are all animals.
We all die.
Nevertheless, humans have pets.
I had cats and dogs and presently tropical fish.
All animals must kill to eat.
Humans kill for sport.
I have nothing concrete about an afterlife.
Humans like to believe they are special.
But, as far as I can tell death is the end.

Bob County
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Rated: E | (5.0)
There is no lack of miracles.
Taking a click through the telly shows miracles galore.
The problem arises when you try to prove them.
How do you prove them?
I like oranges, but should I make everyone eat one?
Christianity is a small religion compared to Islam.
Should the popularity of faith decide its validity?
You are an excellent writer...
I enjoy your style.

Bob County
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