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Review of Cold Wind in May  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A neat poem that paints a beautiful picture of a walk under a bridge. The cool air under the bridge and the feeling of it being May. Of course, the sewer smells it there. I have walked under many bridges, and this brought back some memories. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Bones  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice free verse poem, of what they will know about the writer from their bones. A lot of things can be known by examining bones. I love the ending, pretty much said there was no life without bones being able to show it. Good job. Found this interesting, thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Embracing Change  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice poem about change. We get comfortable with where we are, then subject our selves to a change. Not long afterwards we are right back in our comfortable feelings.
I enjoyed the journey. It causes a reader to think about change. Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Miles Apart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful love poem with alternate rhyming. Distance is a matter here. I love the poem, the anticipation of seeing one another again. Good job, I could feel the emotion through this. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Neat story on a battle between a Pegasus and unicorn. I enjoyed reading this. Good story, good premise. Has a built in message. Just a couple items, 'mountain side' should be one word. And one on one is usually hyphenated. Very small issues, good story as it is. I love unicorns so I was rooting for it. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of The playground  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A cute child's poem. All the different things an imagination can create. Shows a child how these things are in their imagination. It's a good free verse with some rhyming. A child would love this. Thank you for sharing this piece. I enjoyed the journey. Keep writing.


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Review of Scrabble beats me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Such a wonderful gotcha moment! I loved the story, first taking time with your children playing an educational type of game. Then kudos for really trying, however, the young ones of today are so bright. Given enough time they will turn the tables on you in a second. Good job! I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing, keep writing.

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Review of Sweet flowers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice little free verse about the early flowers of spring blooming and dying away, seen from the raindrops' perspective. Good job, it moved easily and was interesting. It was bumpy at the end, so I'm not sure what you meant to say. Other than that, it's a good poem. Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Ichabod Crane Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Music breaks the hard soul. As a farmer breaks ground for seeds, music does the same for the soul. All music does this but we are selective for what we want. We let it in and it stirs our souls. Love this little prose. Very true and descriptive. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A cool poem, of the paradox of release. It serves bittersweet emotions when letting someone go. Good job with this. It's a familiar form with a good rhyming scheme. I enjoyed the journey, thank you. Keep writing.

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Review of Remembrance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful love poem. I set you free. Very easy to read and understand. It reads smoothly and is very descriptive. We all feel that sometime in our lives. Sometimes it's easy, other times not so easy. Good job with the emotions here. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Battle Retrograde  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Not a bad story. Looks like a good start on a long campaign. Very clear premise and is not overly technical. Good job with it. The writing is good, but the font could be a problem for older readers. My question is same as I have had about all these alien sightings and such. If they have the knowledge to get here, why would they? But good story anyway, I did enjoy reading it. Thank you for sharing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A wonderful neat child's poem. Trade a yellow jacket for 2 pies even. Very easy to read, very descriptive. I enjoyed the pictures painted with the words. Good job. Would love to see this with graphics for a child's book. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Tea Time Talk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very true poem. Beautifully done, it resonates with a mother's care. I enjoyed this journey. Mothers do know. It's always been, 'I want Mom.' God made mothers special people. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem. Keep writing.

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Review of Chocolate  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful child's poem. I'm sad I'm reviewing this just before lunch. Good job with easy descriptions. The tempo was nice, not really lumpy, with a good jingle. I enjoyed this journey as a piece of chocolate. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful poem about sleeping under the stars. I could feel the night air and see the stars, even hear natures noises. Good description of the evening. Sleeping outside in the summer can be inspiring to say the least. The content was excellent. The rhythm and rhyme scheme was done very well. I enjoyed this journey. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful rhyming poem, of dragons and butterflies. I enjoyed the journey it took me on. Your words very descriptive and clear. I could see a dragon and the dream above its head as it slept. A butterfly in the dream. Thank you for sharing this piece. It is uplifting in its emotion. Keep writing.

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Review of On Bended Knee  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a beautiful, well-done poem. The 'Good News' through another voice. Exhort everyone and animals to praise Him, I could follow this very easily and understand what you are saying. Beautiful job. I enjoyed this journey, was inspiring. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Survival  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Many see different things in poetry. This I see the flower is a child, the problem is those around are so much older, that the child has to struggle for everything. Siblings could be the trampling feet. Good job with this piece, I enjoyed it. Could feel the struggle with emotion. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Margins  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My feeling about this in the first reading was that of teen lust. The hormones start moving around and suddenly that person you 'played' with on the playground becomes an object of desire. It is hard for teens and young adults at times to understand this feeling and be able to see the difference between lust and love. My opinion is the rating is too low, I think this should be 18 and over. I would try to condense this a bit, being long causes a lapse in attention. I would consider combining a few of the lines. Being free verse, you want to have a beat to it when read. This can be a strong emotional poem with a little work. The content is excellent, through the eyes of a young man or young woman, the thoughts that pull you from studies.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful short story. Very interesting, getting a leprechaun to start a car, as a test to marry the princess. Cool premise. Good story, very clear and smooth to read. I saw no grammatical errors or spelling issues. Good job. I enjoyed this.

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Review of I am a Snowflake!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful poem. I loved the journey it took me on. You used the words to paint a wonderful picture. The cactus against the view of snow falling was great. And imagine being a snowflake—who hasn't? It's such a great thought. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
I think it's an excellent story. The bird with why, and the wolf with don't bother me. Good job with the content. Some suggestions for easier reading. Break it out. A space between the dialogs, would make it much easier to read. Also a few places you missed the period. A once or twice over editing this would be excellent little story. Good job. I enjoyed this story. Keep writing.


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Review of What You Are  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful love poem. Comparing feelings for him with events in nature. Good job. Hope he like this. It read very well and was very clear. The picture in my head would have been a person standing with all these things around them but dim. Good job. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Movies Galore  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I believe I have seen all of those at one time or another. When you raise 5 children, you watch TV, mostly with them. Good job. I made word searches but was not good at doing them LOL.
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