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Review of Meeting Aliens  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Neat little story of being abducted by aliens. This could be more than fiction, who knows anymore. I enjoyed this story, small confusion about the 4th paragraph. No big issues, just a word or two out of place, it seems. But good story, I suggest increasing font size. Only a suggestion. Good story. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Lie to Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I feel this is a King who is condemning those who lied to him. That if truth had been told, things would be different. Interesting poem, does cause you to think, should you always tell the truth? I suppose there are times fear prevents the truth from being told. Good strong free verse poem. Only suggestion I have is center it and increase font size. Poem is wonderful as it is.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That is some list!! You have more horror books listed than my library has! Not to mention all the movies. Excellent collection. Good job. I read every title but probably only remember a few. My wife loved those horror movies. Good job.


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Review of Fragility  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel someone caught in something that seems hopeless, no matter how vile it seems. Repeat of the 3rd stanza shows being stuck in the web is key to issues. I enjoyed reading this and trying to think it through. Good job with conveying the emotion of fear and the resolution to accept the web. Just my thoughts. I suggest centering it and increasing font size. It's a powerful poem. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of To Begin  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this prose. A baby is about to wreak havoc on mom and dad by learning to crawl. Now begins their workout time chasing this baby. I love each stanza of the child sizing things up and getting prepared for the big crawl. Interesting prose, crawling from a child's viewpoint. Good job, I enjoyed reading this. Only suggestion increase the font size and maybe center it. Just a suggestion, it's good as it stands. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Neat little poll on your favorite Sonic character. I can see this as useful for a fanfiction writer to write about their favorite characters. As well as info for setting up an interactive story. Good insight to prepare this way. Smart move. No suggestions on the poll, of course, not much you can change. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice little poem. I had to look up the Eld Vintic poetry to understand. I feel this could be about writers block. And seeking inspiration to overcome it. I would suggest larger font and center it. Just to be visually pleasing. The poem itself is wonderful after discerning what the reader should feel. Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing.

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Review of You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel a love poem here. A very good free verse poem with a good flow. It's all about 'you'. Beautiful picture painted with those words. Good job. The only suggestion is to increase the font size and center the whole poem. Just a suggestion, this is a good poem as it stands. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Edgar Allan Poe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this poem. About the Master of Horror. Good job with the rhyming scheme. Easy to read and follow, does cause us to think in Poe's terms. Good job. The only suggestion is to increase the font size and maybe center it. The poem is good as it stands. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Sunny Girl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Such makes the world go round. Poems to school crush. Been there but was never much of a poet back then. Good job with this. I could see you melting when comparing her to the brightness of the sun. Good poem. I suggest centering it and increasing the size of the font. Just a suggestion, other than that this is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading this and the picture it conjured up. Thank you. Keep writing.

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Review of Stop the Parade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful, cute poem of someone saving a child and mother. Someone is a town drunk. Interesting, making a hero of a specific town drunk. I enjoyed this poem, causing me to think a little deeper than what is being said. Good job. Thank you. Only suggestion would be to increase the font size, other than that, this is a good poem. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful poem about a wonderful grandmother: just her past actions will cause us to think. Often, we get tied up in our own worlds, and we forget loved ones. Good poem. Caused me to remember my own grandmother and her crocheting. Loved the emotion this brings out. Good job. Only suggestion is increase the font size, only a suggestion. Great little poem as it stands. Thank you for sharing.
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Review of Cruel Perfection  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good rhyming poem. The striving for perfection feeds stress. Knowing that perfection is unattainable does not change the striving for perfection. Good job bringing this all the way around. You could say it is perfect in its imperfection. I enjoyed this journey. Thank you for encouraging the reader to think about things. Only suggestion is increase the font size. For readability. Other wise its a very good standing poem. Keep writing.

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Review of Bracelet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Neat little free verse about keeping or discarding an item full of 'bits of memory'. I can see that. Cleaning attics, or basements, and finding items. Most are kept, the memories sometimes fully remembered, sometimes not. Good poem. I would center it and increase the font size. Just a suggestion. The poem is good as it stands. Thank you for the journey. Keep writing.

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Review of No Sudden Moves  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice little essay on the cat. Seeing through a cat's eye can be fun. Wondering what is really going on in their head is a good hobby. I enjoyed this story, and I have seen this many times in slightly different circumstances, with my grandkids and my cats. Good job. Good talent showing here. I suggest a larger font, just for readability. Good story as it stands. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful poem, of what love is. I remember several years ago 'Love is' was used many times. Very descriptive and holds the readers attention well. I would suggest increasing the size of the font. The poem is good as it is, very entertaining. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this story. All dialog. It was done very well. Hooked me and pulled me all the way to the end. Good job. I saw no real problems, grammar or otherwise. The only thing I would suggest is to increase the size of the font. Just a suggestion, the story is very good and the dialogue is handled very well. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Midnight Golf  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good short story, vampires playing golf. Good twist! Good story, easy to follow. No real bumps, I would break out the conversation a bit more. More white space. But a very good story. Had me all the way till the fangs. Thought he would hand him a club that would have passed through his hand. Some good talent here. Keep writing.

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Review of Free Verse  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A neat little free verse poem. Easy to follow and very descriptive. I can feel someone would be saying this to a lover. It was very well written and strong in its message. I would suggest increasing the font size just for readability. Only a suggestion, as the poem is good as it stands. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Where are you?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can feel the love for someone that is not logically there. Questioning 'where are you?' says no one is there, just your memory of them. Beautiful free verse poem of feeling the loved one but knowing they are not there. Good emotional poem. I enjoyed reading and thinking about this, which brings nice memories to me. I would center it and title it. Just a suggestion, it stands nicely as it is.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This sounds like an excellent beginning for a Christmas Horror. Krampus would take one bad child. I would break it up into paragraphs and increase the size of the font. Grammar looks fine, story premise is sound. I enjoyed reading this, it left me wanting more of the story. Good job. Some good talent shows through here. Thank you for sharing such an interesting story.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Neat little poem with a good rhyming scheme. How can there be honor amongst thieves? Interesting poem, showing words are easy, actions define the person. The line 'enter as Master leaves' tells me they don't want to be confronted. It's just a feeling I get with this poem. Good job with punctuation and grammar. It reads well with strong descriptions. Only suggestion is to title at the top in bold and center the whole piece. It's excellent as it stands, though. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Lullaby  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel this is a poem of a recently deceased child. The older ghosts watch, and the angels know. But this ghost keeps acting as a party. What we see is quiet, but what is going on is probably much different. Good job. This was easy to follow and read. I suggest centering it with a bold title. Good job, plenty of talent showing through here. Keep writing. Thank you for sharing.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
There are some beautiful poems here. Very broad range of perspectives and discriptions. I enjoyed reading these, each one with an individual thought. Good job showing your talent. I would suggest separating them and maybe entering a contest or activity. Thank you for sharing, it does show a lot of talent. Keep writing.

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Review of Purple Paradise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A beautiful poem with a solid rhyming scheme. I felt I was being told of a paradise that we shall take part in, someday. It's beautiful in that it presents Hope to those who read or hear this. This is a very emotional piece with lots of talent showing. We all want and need hope. I would suggest increasing the font size and putting a title at the top. Gives it a very appealing appearance. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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