Fantastic!
Your great poem is a clear ode to Indo-Pak cricket of 2004, India won the series; you have shown though there are millions of differences in ideals, politics, philosophy, religion, governance and economy, India preserved her glory, spirit, status and performance; Prime Minister of India wished Indians should not only win the game but also win the hearts of the Pakistanis.
I like and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the rhymes, the story, the news, the word visuals, the free flow of thoughts, and word imagery.
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AN ODE TO INDO-PAK CRICKET: award winner
(An Ode to Indo-Pak Cricket)
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India, Pak, twin nations,
Have many aberrations.
(India, Pak, twin nations
have many aberrations.)
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Religion and politics,
Of the two countries, don’t mix.
(Religion and politics
of the two countries, don’t mix.)
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Democratic, secular,
Against Muslim dictator!
(India a Democratic, Secular
against Muslim dictator.)
You are free to accept or reject any of the edits and comments.
Great, I do feel happy, well inspired and glad to write a review and I send this fourth (4th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 12 years ago in June, 2007.
Thank you for sharing your excellent poem with us.
I congratulate you for your winning the award on the contest poem.
Keep on writing.
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