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Review of Apple  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is good....I like the story behind it. The lines 'a constant reminder of my weakness and 'such a tasty treat to cause so many difficulties' are very powerful- so true! I tried to write something like that once but yours is more simple, but with the feeling that you know it applys to real life!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
LOVE IT!!!! This piece paints such a pretty picture. I love the way you described the clouds like a racehorse....So pretty.
Keep writing!!
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