This is poem is relatable to many I am sure.The feeling that one really isn't loved or adored, just looked at as someone to be taken advantage of.Someone that is just there for the pure amusement of another however no real love.Thanks for the share and the reminder that no one wants to be treated this way.
Yeah I get it I am a country girl all the way.I will visit place but I am going home to the country hen it's all said and done.I grow up ply in dirt making mud pies,climbing trees,eating fruit from trees and making things out of clay from the clay mount.I would not have had that part any other way.Thanks for the share country boy it made me smile.
Thanks for the share and the reminder that nature is a wonder. Sometimes it's great and terrible all at the same time.Sometimes we get to enjoy it other times it scares us.Some times it tears up some stuff ,other times it makes beautiful music for us to behold.How can all this bot remind me there is a HP.
Thanks this was a good weather warning for us all.I am glad that it was short to the point however very detailed all at the same time.I like he way you use the poem of a famous poet/writer. I like the way you used that as your jumping off point to make you point.I also like the way you ended the poem.
What we believe some believe we become so that being said that means we have to be really careful what we believe about ourselves and others. I am glad you wrote about what you feel and how you saw things at that time.I am glad you are putting you thoughts into written word sometimes it makes more sense that way.
My son and I was talking about angels today and the awesomeness if them and the fear of them.i don't think I would have been okay with an angel showing up good news or bad news or good one or bad one the fear would not be something could deal with at all.The angel would have to be in human form period.
Thanks for the share I am glad you got it all out of your system by writing this.There is some strength in telling the truth on yourself ,in being honest to the core.I am glad you feel free enough to write like this on our site so keep writing it can heal the soul.
Thanks for the share it's the start of a great story.So I am not sure where this story is going however there is several ways it could go.I am glad the boy has a friend because the dad seems mean to him and not to like him too much.I guess with the cat around the dad will be a least a little friendlier.
Thanks for sharing this somewhat weird story it had a very interesting ending.I am glad there are many different types of stories for different types of folks.I am not sure if i like this story or not for sure.However I am trying to read out of my confront zone a little more.
Thanks for the little poem about when you meet your baby for the first time.I am thankful that my child has been every pain I think well at least for the most part.I love being his om so much even when he is getting on my nerves it's just a little harder to remember in those times.I am a better person partly because of my son.
Thanks for the share yeah boredom can make us investigate site and stuff we might not normally.I do a lot of things on the internet and such when I am bored so I guess your boredom was all about distraction or so it seems to me.Thanks for the share keep writing.
Thanks for the share interesting poem beauty and such is in the eyes of the beholder I would say so is what is inferior and what is not.Thanks for the share sounds like everything worked out for the best ,they went to art college and then got a job and that's great.
Thanks for the share so you know that possibility the problem is completely solvable depending on if you love the beast or not knowledge is power and in the last verses or two is the answer because if you are disposable then the beast is too.It was stated we are all disposable and all means All even a beast.Thanks hopeful your beast is gone.
Thanks so much for this poem yes every storm fades sooner or later and the bow will shine again.Thanks this was a nice reminder that no storm last forever whether it be literally or figurelly they do and will pass.Keep sharing your short and sweet poems that are uplifting.
Thanks for this share I can see that you love our country.I am thankful that there are some that say not today still in this land. I am grateful that I live in a land for the most part is free.I am grateful that you have spoken up for what you truly believe in this post giving others something to think about.Keep sharing and thank you very much for the work you have done here in this poem.
Thanks for the share it's a nice poem and reminder for me today. I am thankful for the reminder of his grace where we can true find peace and joy. I am not perfect nor will i ever be however thank his goodness his love and peace is made perfect even though i am weak.I look to the hills which cometh from the Lord may he lead and guide me forever more.Thanks again please keep writing about his grace.
Thanks for this share I am a mother so I get it I do.My has left came back again so you never know and once I have sent him away.So you just never know what life will bring we just dont.At least yours is out of the nest which shows the strength of what you have taught them,you taught them to fly.
Thanks for the share this is short and sweet.As powerful as fire is water will dounce it's flame.The blaze of a fire can set our world ablaze however water will stop it in its tracks. Fire and water has it's beauty and it's strength.Thanks for the writing keep writing.
Wow that was a lot and very interesting however probably not true.I really could care less because there's no good candidates just one womens thoughts on the matter.It's sort of like they said Bart Simpson could predict the future which is questionable also.We seem to spend a lot of time trying to look into the future verses just living in the present.Thanks for sharing never knew this to be honest.
Nice thanks for the share grateful for your share makes me want to smile. Keep writing because clearly that is how you fly. I am thankful that we don't have to be birds to fly many things can help us fly from writing,to dance, to prayer etc,so we do fly.
Thanks for the share and yep I get it being DD myself it can be hard Life can be made easier if we can find others that can and are willing to relate in some way to our pilate.When we talk about it that can also help to and with both of these actions hopefully we realize we aren't so different than many others who suffer in silence.
Thanks for this share seems like the writer likes Fall a lot.All season I am learning has its blessings and brings with it it's troubles or headaches so it is what it is.Thanks for pointing out the blessings of Fall.I enjoyed this reading and reminder about Fall's blessings!
Thanks for the share yes Covid that very frustrated disease that seems to plague us endlessly.It's not as powerful as it was however its still has quite a bite.Just one more thing that plagues our lands these days.One more disease to try and upset our ease.Covid is here to stay so it's all in how we deal with it.
Thanks for the share yes traffic is so bothersome to be in theses days.I guess you have to leave home at least 30-1 hour earlier these days if you live in a major city.In the smaller cities you maybe able to get by with leaving 20 mins early because even in my small city anymore traffic is a problem.Folks also drive so aggressively also I have been hit 3 times this year alone.
Thanks for sharing yes Christmas in war would be different than the ones we take for granted in peace.This is a good reminder that we are blessed more than we realize.Christmas this year will be different because I am dealing with grief so my heat and soul is at war and when you are as you know Christmas just hits different.
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