Good to see another classical fantasy poet out there (I am one). I enjoyed your poem. The lines have an interesting tendency to almost rhyme but not quite, which I find pleasant and interesting. I guess there are a few minor technical issues, like using the word "than" in "And than if I shall" instead of the word "then," which seems like the correct word. But I thought it was a very good poem overall.
An abba quatrain poem huh? Very interesting. I guess it is a scary poem. The ending reminds me of a serial killer, although it seems like it's more of a supernatural shadow monster kind of thing. Am I right?
Your poem is pretty. I like the rhyming, which I think is a great literary device which is unfortunately out of fashion. What made you choose the phoenix as the object of the poem?
Thank you for your excellent poem.
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