I enjoyed this poem. The poet easily shows the reader whats in their heart and mind while writing this. The flow is great and the rhymth is spot on. I have friends that have been in lots of shelters and some have been a shelter for abused women. I`m glad they have places for women like this. Thanks for sharing this
I enjoyed this poem. You did a great job with the words and the shape of the poem. I was impressed with your rhythm and poise with each line. You showed the reader your resistance is pretty high and you take a fancy to each one of your poems. Thanks again for sharing
Nice poem. This happens to people a lot more than you think. Thank God it hasnt happened to me. It can sure mess someones life up. If they take any of your money then it gets even harder. Thats why its best not to give out any of your passwords. Thanks for sharing this. You did a great job at pointing this out
Congrats on your upgrade. How many points do you need to get an upgrade? I have got almost 70,000 points. I`m probably sitting low on the totem pole. I have been here almost 3 weeks and really enjoying this group. Lots of good people and really good poets. Have a nice day
I enjoyed this poem. Every mans wife or girlfriend deserves to be loved and loved in return. You show this very well and your flow is great. Your rhyme is very good to detail. Your imagery is well displayed and shown easily on paper. Thanks for sharing this poem and sharing your thoughts to others.
I enjoyed this poem. I also enjoy the outdoors and enjoy reading any poem thats shows this. Your pen was idealy perfection while writing this and it shows the reader how your heart is full of passion for the outdoors. Water is an amazing spectacle in life and you did a great job at revealing this. Thanks for sharing this
very nice on the omega. Great shape and to the tee on the definition. the a-z ologies your missing the Y so your total is 25 not 26. boxology and xlyology are made up is my guess. well done on your tetractys. Your Ode to Science is also well done and flows quite well. Thanks for sharing these poems about science,
I enjoyed this. Thanks for taking the time to share this experience with the reader. Your form was very good and your rhythmn was directed in a perfect manner. The story was condensed so to make the reader go from beginning to the end with high spirit. Your mind shows brilliance and well thought of fiction. Bravo on this nice piece. Thanks for sharing
this is good. I enjoyed the poem. Many little girls have thoughts that are out of this world but when your a kid anything can happen. Your poem shined and showed the ability of bringing smile and grace to this story. Thanks for hsaring this poem and for your gift
wonderful poem and song. This rings true and the words are for the heart. You expressed pure love of nature and purety. I agree with the poem/songs entitlement. The heart is natures blessing when it fills it with love and a blessing. Thanks for sharing this poem
I really enjoyed this. We often have so many places we can go to in relating a better place a more peaceful place. You made me right in the middle of your poem and I enjoy when a poet can do that. As kids we make believe but if you really think about it its not make believe at all. Its your special place no matter what others think. A place to go when times are tough where you can talk to God where you can release the pressure of life. Even as adults we have similar places but thery are guarded more often than as kids. I`m glad you had this special place that you went to and that you can share this moment. Its nice to look back and remember and relive those moments. Thanks for sharing this. I made a favorite
Truly a blessed writing. You have a talent of very few. Your pen comes alive and pours out your hearts content. I enjoyed the openness of the characters and the poems meaning. Healing is an important role in life and its shown here equally. Peace and tranquility go hand in hand and bless the soul. Thanks for sharing this
I enjoyed this poem. You were very clever in your words and how you feel inside. You show the true meaning of what a writer feels. It shows others to capture their dreams and show others how you feel. The mystery is when you accomplish all your heart has to offer. Thanks for sharing this
Wonderful poem on nature. I myself enjoy poems on the seasons. Your poem shows happiness and joy. I also like poems on animals. Your creative balance shows your passion inside your heart. You encourage others to pour out the heart and be yourself. Thanks again for the wonderful piece.
A beautiful poem about a wedding and honeymoon. The fellow traveled a lot but realized after a time with his wife that traveling was finally done. His wife was more important and he should more time with her. If he did so travel that he would take her with him. A wonderful poem and thanks for sharing
I enjoyed this poem. You did this Septet perfectly. We have a dog and a cat. Bagel is our cat and Cheyenne is our dog. The cat is a orange and white tabby and our dog is a German Shepherd. Cheyenne is 8 months old and Bagel is 3 months old. They both get along great. I love poems about animals. Thanks for sharing this
What a wonder rendition of heaven. I cant wait to not feel pain and be with my creator. That will be a glorious day. All your troubles will be left on earth and soon all your loved ones will join you. You pray that they soon accepted Jesus as their personal savior. We always have to remember whe our loved ones day its not a sad day it is a glorious day. a day to celebrate their time on earth and to celebrate that they are with God forever. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem
Well put poem. You have to start somewhere. The mind can put magic down on paper and in a pen. You share with others what your mind can create. Not easy to all but might be very easy to others. You combine your talent and passion and show others your gift and they read it with compassion. Thanks for sharing this
lol good poem. I have had this happen to me many times. More in lines of a dog though. Thats why its best to clean up after your animals so you dont do this lol. I have made quite a few poems regaurding how I felt about someone and referred the poem to manure lol. thanks for sharing this
Hi Jace well depicted poem. Its hard to get back into the swing of things. Being away for so long puts crutches on the pen and the mind. Like you said take baby steps and get back into the swing of things. A lot of things will come natural like riding a bike again. Once you start it will be easy and you wont want to stop. Thanks for sharing this
I enjoyed this poem. When it comes to drones they will come up with about anything. For all we know next Christmas will be a santa claus. It is endless for stuff like this. Its pretty cool that someones comments brought out what they actually wanted. Thanks for sharing this
This was really good. I enjoyed this fine flowing poem. It kept me interested throughout the whole poem and it was easy to understand. Funny how he did this out of his van but hey you got to make an earning and keep the van afloat. Cant say I ever did this myself but I am sure this is fiction. Well done and best of luck for more poems like this one
A Beautiful poem. Yes you are correct the gift of love is by far the best gift you can get or give. Its priceless and can go a long way. Many want meterial things which is nice but often never last. Some do of course but love is beyond any concrete gift. I believe love can last a lifetime and beyond. Thanks for sharing this awesome poem
this poem is good. Lots of imagery. Your inner voice telling of how your feeling and very strong with conviction. You let it be known to not leave home. Your mind is made up and nothing is going to change it. The words flow perfectly and are perfectly formatted. Thanks for sharing this Keaton
I honestly didnt understand this. The only thing I might of got out of it was the mother had passed away and the woman didnt realize it till then. Some afre so used to their life and when someone passes it can change dramitically. I hope I was correct in what you wrote
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