Kudos! I really liked the ending and the climax of the woman's story the best. I'm pretty new to this website, so I can freely admit that I was a bit confused by the woman's sudden appearance without a prop to explain how the main character just accepted her input. Other than that, there was only one other mistake I could detect, and that was the usage of 'Anyways'. It should always be 'Anyway.'
Thanks for receiving my meager input, I will be looking at other items in your portfolio!
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