its amazing the kind of fundamental questions you ask in this piece, it is a puzzle of everyone, and each is trying to work out an answer that fits something they know,.....alright now,lemme see if we can make this interactive, try to come up with a reply, just to share a little bit of what i think might be true....
i am so glad to be a part of this interactive piece, i sure do hope that many people can join in and do replies as part of reviews, sort of like to grow the story and give each ones experience which becomes one beautiful big piece that holds the soul pf many authors. i mean, could there be a better beauty of writing that this?
i read this with tears in my eyes and struggled to see some of the words, so i had to take a minute, breath, and read again. Love is indeed one of the most mysterious and easiest thing for us. fear on the other hand works overtime to keep us away from living what, like you said, the heart already knows. i think i may be in love, i am not sure. but i have to say. this poem captures all that i am right now, it asks all of my questions, and speaks what i sometimes have difficulty saying, and or thinking.
I just wanna say, this piece is really good, its true and honest. its real life, i mean its the truth of mine and most people. i love how, i couldn't stop thinking about my own situation while reading through, i am immersed in the words and resonate with them and what they mean and say....
well, i am just gonna read it again.
good job
this is a such a warm piece, its very present.its a beautiful prayer. its home. a peaceful place. the poet is so tender and anchored, in the strength of who a person is,in the core of being a woman, the depths of being and becoming.
William, oh my goodness, someone wake me up! this is easily one of the most captivating pieces i have read in quite some time. i love how you make me hold my breath as you hold yours, i am living every minute with you and can see what you see, and feel it all.. is there more? i cannot wait to read some more.. or live some more.
Awesome.
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