Very good writing. The story is quite clearly told, and while it is also clear that some content is of "adult" nature, it is not an adult story because of the way it is written. The characters are developed well and the war is fleshed out just enough to get the idea without burdening the reader with mountains of details about specific battles. I hope for the story to continue.
Keep writing on this. I didn't realize that it was the same writer all the way through. This chapter is amazing. It's intense and despite the fact that when I look back over it nothing much happens it still is interesting. I'd write some in myself if i wasn't so interested in where this is going. Don't stop.
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