UMMX's (omg-ummx) Reviews

UMMX

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15 Public Reviews Given

15 Total Reviews Given

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#4606674

Review of With Love

Review by UMMX

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This was a good story, short wasn't good way to describe it... She was in love an never notice it, This has a lot info and can be used a study into the mind of the motional women of today again age.

Well at least now she has a ghost Boyfriend, whom can now watcher forever!

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#4605887

Review of Shrunk at Walmart

Review by UMMX

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Okay I love this, it was funny and like how both characters ended up in different trap in the stories. Shame there not more, but it was funny. Also you could have made them be trap in the store more.

Also a lot people get size wrong a inch is shorter than pinky on some people

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#4605818

Review of Sisters of Fate - Chapters 1-3

Review by UMMX

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

I think this story has a great start, If you have a magic or a caste system; it would be cool if you dive into it. Also if the goddess warn them about the child, does that mean she wants it happen.

I'm little into the story, I hope you have a great day.

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#4605481

Review of Naruto: Inflation Suit Adventure

Review by UMMX

Rated: E

| (2.5)

Okay I read a lot of the chapters and this interactive and it all starts good and fun. I will say the biggest story just got bad, if that person wants; to tale dead end world story that's on them. You can see it come, The smaller stories are fun, also you can't add to those big world line.

That just how I feel... Have good day..

5

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#4605467

Review of The transformation adventures of Naruto

Review by UMMX

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

This story might be long but most of chapters are trash or just one line. For free or unregister this story is a Past, with how site work I wouldn't tell anyone to read it.

The Story could have better with longer chapters and more of the Naruto world... Sorry..

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#4605369

Review of Naruto and the Hermpire Ring

Review by UMMX

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

This Naruko is wild, I not shock at how wild she is, but I'm shock at how fast he going at turn everyone.

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#4605363

Review of Naruto: Last Man Alive

Review by UMMX

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

I remember this story it was on FF.net and on few other page... I do wonder if this will be as long as your other stories, Also how many chapter can people add.

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