I see one mistake repeatedly. The word I is suppose to be upper case. I'm sure you know. You probably just got in a rush.
Kinda wondering what would make you come up with a poem like this. What inspired you to write it.
All in all its a good poem.
Just a wondering mind.
This piece grabbed my heart.
The work of poetry can do two things for ones soul,
To help express emotiona one is unable to share do to the step of greiving
And, its a pathway to healing a wounded heart.
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