This paragraph writing is holding correct manner of introduction and conclusion. Within a few lines of paragraph, meaning is conveyed so the story is appealing also. So in the whole , Robbers is a good understanding paragraph. This also helps us to be careful with robbers. Name of this 'Robbers' is small. So this is easy to measure. Overall I am rating it in full.
This poem teaches us to be purposeful, kind judgement, good character, permanent , skillful, humble, fore sight , gratitude.
I am reminded of a exam that i have on 28-5-2014.
My near people are envying me for justifying my needs and forthcoming with meaningful answers for the questions they ask. To day I studied a lot in my subject of examination, Just I got bored and started entering Reviews, This poem striked me for telling the characteristics we should posses in this emerging world , or we will become aimless, tiresome, or demeaning.
Students should be strict in their studies as well as character. Employer should have gratitude and pride. Worker should have a feeling of permanence, skillful , passionating , seeking rewards. Good character, humbleness, kind judgement are the words that bring goodness.
We get a inspiration to be ourselves with purposeful, kind judgement, good character, permanent , skillful, humble, fore sight , gratitude with encouragement and philosophical rights of reasoning.
This poem has a good nature of explaining about a Clock.
A clock has three hands-- many words are there , many believes, many hopes.
Brings the hearts together leaving a terrible starvation.
We preserve ourselves from domination.
Its a damp thing without hesitation.
Hearts become wild with over indulgence.
We can go through our thoughts , so becomes difficult to live.
Teaches us about our world. For example: I am a Teacher, I have my word. I teach. this is my word. My belief is Childrens learn. My hope is Children should earn from what they learn. If every body have a word like this. The Clock can help them live the life.
Otherwise the Clock behaves like a damon, taking away every thing.
I liked the poem. It has a flow.
This poem has a meaning.
This poem has a message.
But this poem has difficult words.
More reviews can bring a clear cut idea of the poem. Mine is a simple review.
Good Guy always writes good things, but when he is in sorrow , his thoughts change to questions, He asks but yells... No answer. Still he can never turn bad because his is not in him but in the God who is in him. Lie has two meaning one lie down second tell lies. Here the Lie purpounds to two rounds like , Let me sleep. Stop thinking. Second Let me leave. stop telling.
Thinking is done while lieing
Talking is done while lieing
The lie has two meaning
But that Guy has only one meaning.
He is He and no one else until I guess it is me in him that is he.
Yea, This a a wonderful loving poem,
I like to read it forever.
I am fully me.
Sometimes unable to retain in me.
I look into future, When I don't want to leave.
I see past, When I am fully me, then I smile.
I stare in present tense.
What a great poem.
Not exaggerating , but completely containing the meaning.
When I first saw this Item , I felt I was going to see a hounting story. Because it is UNDER A WILLOW TREE.
But when I read further I came to understand that this story is about a LONG PERIOD OF TIME ( aging WILLOW tree) Step FAther and Mother come to existance only when the times past too long. Poor Kid Loses it Near ones. How ever, The continuation of the story tell about a boy younger to the girl. She nears to him becuase he is akid and plays.
The story enters the grooming section of the girl , when she forgets past and loof forward to future.
Passion to do something eventualy hiers her,"haunt" word is used to show that the Girl becomes afraid of the boy as he grows up.
However she felt , "OLD IS GOLD" , Always when she felt , "SHE HAD SOMETHING".
The important thing is "EVERYBODY KNOW , LIFE IS HOUNTING , GIRL SANITIFIES BECAUSE SHE IS INSANE, SHE CARRIES HUMAN VALUES" IN THIS STORY.
I am honest. I am reviewing this item because I liked the way this item is presented. Understandeble and Clear.
This is a very long item to read and understand. I think it will be good if you split the whole story into three passages. Next is the spelling and grammer are good. But the narration who says what is mensioned in a story telling manner. While writing a story we should be aware of correctly notifing the person who speaks - which we give in quotations. Next is the author himself narrates his own story. Trouble is caused for both the writer as well as the reader, while repeating the same thing. It is good if we use the same repeating technique which brings humer as well as the meaning is conveyed. This is done in the last two sentences. I liked it.
Competitions help in bringing knowledge of all human being to fit. they can understand the every methord of getting compensations for all they do. They can get benifits to their curriculums. choice of heading , concluding sections , language ability, spelling and grammer, communication all have importance. This competitions give them to gain english verbal ability.
Nice, You can improve your grammer a little more. The alphabetic order is interesting. Meaning is conveyed in all lines. Understandable. Managed rymings. 'm hopin' like words can be avoided. twisting is not seen in the poetry. this makes it less. Its good to keep the rymings only in the ends.The Ryming 'my bed' 'my head' makes more interest for readers.
This story is Encouraging. This Story is sercastic with its well versed statistical words a hundred pounds more imaginative and creative writing. The humanic power exceeds to the highest level of the best writing. The flow in the writing shoud be appreciated for sure. How did you imagine the begining to the end of the story. The sercastic branching and turning points gives a special attraction to it. The story ends saying that the merchant chequed the story for eight and a half million dollers. The same figure has come in the top saying..The cash just magically turns up. The cash you had tagged up in the first line is the cash that you received from the marchant. This idea cannot be just an imagination in one run. Anything once captured in mind persists upto the mystrious end of the story.
The whole incident was percieved from the newspaper as if it were real and revealed insipte of being convicted by the Trustees in the manuscript. The manuscript contained the reveald story. Even though it was gifted Eight and a half million dollers, it was to be returned to marchant. This senario shows a no ending flow of the incident in to thought or thought into incident.
Your staying place and job are changing as the willingness grows in your heart. However you are convinced with what ever you have had in your hands.
"While his colleagues disassembled the rooms I had so lovingly created, he read on. I sat and watched, staggered that his total involvement with my characters and story thrilled me so, even while my home was being ravaged."
This statement makes me feel convinced with the polite and obliged genuineness in me. If I could be just as that, it could win me whatever that is as precious as Eight and a half million dollers.
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