jeff's (penngray2) Reviews

jeff

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#2482080

Review of When I Was Comfortable Enough to Laugh

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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

you absolutely roll.

exsanguinating...what the hell?

I get the impression you know a little about of what the songs of Steely Dan sing...

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#1933726

Review of Prologue/Introducing Cassie Allen

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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

I am not a mystery reader, but I found myself instantly involved with Cassie's ordeal.
It is very clear and well written, with no problems that I could find.
I hope to read the rest when you finish.
Thanks,
Jeff

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#1929117

Review of Bad Poetry Contest Entry: Candy

Review by jeff

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Sometime's just for fun, huh!
I liked it very much.

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#1915524

Review of Game On!

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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Had me going for a second there. Nicely done, and absolutely not what I expected.

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#1898241

Review of My Friend

Review by jeff

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)

I have never really enjoyed writing or reading poetry, but have found what I've been reading on Writing.com refreshing and raw.

Your poem has an honesty that makes me want to read more.

You might try to include apostophes.