Yes good. Think you might have missed m of "the see to eventually just disappear" This sentence is the best ever explination of how a psychopathic person might develop. 'My emotions seem to disappear and I became a monster inside '
Good, but sad. Hope it is not true.
It is quite long, but it shows how found you were of him. However you only give the part of his life that involves you. How old was he, what did he do in his life, his personality, his friends his house. etc. Does not go deep enough into his personality.
It would be very funny, if it was not so rude. Thats just me though, I shock easily. Not really into poems, but it tells a neat little story. Sure can understand you would be like this and can sense your wanting to get your own back and you did, if this really happened .
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