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Review of A memory of you  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello pendroppedbeneath, the piece you write seems interesting enough. Two people that falling in love and the fascination they have for each other. I am not sure at all what a diptique is or if it is spelled right and punctuation is inconsistent (I is not capitalized. Thanks 👍


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing your work with us Rashi. Immediately 😄 enjoying the similes it meanders in ways that leave me breathless. I like the words that speak about a storm swirling in a shallow bowl waiting for a curb for it, it to roll. Well worth the read.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Nora. I was left of feelings at a loss in midst of Giant upsurge against the opponents in your place I would like better descriptions so that I might be clearer of my investment. I think the opening meets a need of yours and the reader.4 God bless.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lonewolf it was a pretty intense plot. My first impression was of of comings back without any returns. I would like to have more character development. I know little about Damian. I will look forward to more sharing about this topic thanks for offering.


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In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello 👋 wandering thoughts the flow of your piece is well presented. There is the contrast between the characters and the two fates. On the one hand sticks to the drudgery of medicine and old age. Then in the song song kind of way reminded life can change.


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Review of WHEREVER YOU GO  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ri Leigh, thanks 🙏 you for sharing your sentiments. Life is a journey filled with all manner of experience and we can have no excuse. I am glad for your candor, willing to go the extra mile for another person. Thanks 😊 for sharing your gift. I look forward to reading more.


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Review by drifter Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks GB, Williams I am a man of prayer myself and it is good to have in my hands the excellent resources you share. I have the experience of pastoring for many years American Baptist Churches. My mother was my other influence in sharing. Thanks for sharing.


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Review by drifter Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks 😊 Don two for your Betelgeuse a la mode. I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyming. I Wonder 🧐 about all the fuss about such a good muffin. It sounds like a long way to go for the experience of finding a muffin. Thanks for the we experience. I trust others will need go.


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Thanks Toska I have a brother who took had schizophrenia and I had bipolar disorder. Your words serve as an encouragement as many other professionals and person seek out solutions to how best to alleviate the pains and distress. Please don't forget you are not alone.


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Review of Visual Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you story mistress so many words to paint a picture. I am glad for your work and journey to be with others to seek the truth about what telling what life story is all about. You give us all time to ponder what that means for our lives. Thanks for sharing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing this intimate father and son piece. I brings to mind the many passages that are gone through in our walk together in life. I enjoy the rhyming and flow of your poem. So such to remember of memories that have been forgotten. Thanks


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Review of Joyous Morning  Open in new Window.
Review by drifter Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks 😊 for joyous morning Kenwood. I like you way you format your poem. It speaks to me like the song you want to sing. I look forward to more work. I enjoy writing poetry myself and it gives me cause to celebrate. Your words and comparison complementary.


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Review of Van Gogh  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing your piece no Sox with Sandals. I especially like the picture of Van Gogh you are using to highlight your work. It flows well and meets the needs of the viewer. "Frozen as paint evil looming. Thanks for sharing your work with us today.


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Review of State of Mind  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks for sharing Sinbad, a reminder that it is up to us to determine our destiny. Much of the time we take this for granted. There can be many ways to get to the same place. I find myself wondering how it could be different in a different place. Tx for sharing.


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Review of Cthulhu Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks much for your offering J Cosmos, I would like know more about Lovecraft and where he was coming from. I am guessing he is an author also about who this new God who is mentioned. It reminds me a bit of science fiction show about shifting portals. Tx for sharing.


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Review of Good night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks howl for sharing your poem. I enjoyed your sentiments wishing well looking to the future and seeing how kind and precious life can be in the end. The rhyming of your poem is consistent and makes for an easy read. I am glad you took time to share.


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Review of A Piece of Cake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Lonewolf nice 👍 work with the words given. It was fun to read my name and invitation to cake at the end. Very well done 👍 grammatically. I left 🤔 intrigued by the flag ceremony and wondered what that meant for each of them. Keep writing appreciate your work.


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Review of Gardens  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Jacky the intrigue and 🤔 confusion seems to have a lot to do with an understanding how something could go so horribly wrong. I would like more details and characters development. Thanks for sharing. I will look forward to reading more of your work.


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Review by drifter Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jeanie thanks for how you are able to illustrate for us the many clouds and where they are in relationship with each other. I might want to know more of how your work reflects such a glorious image. Thanks for sharing it will be interesting to see more of your work


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Review of Death Upon My Lap  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very sobering tale shared in couplet form looking at what love 😚 looks like for you as a soul in relationship to another. Lots of remembering about surviving and learning to live a life of peace. I look forward to reading more of your poetry God bless you.


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Review by drifter Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for your beautiful testimony reflection of my own journey into being a Christian, whether as poem or prayer it gives us all things to strive for. None of us deserves to live this life alone. I love the way it flows and look forward to more of your work.
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Review of Happy Birthday  Open in new Window.
Review by drifter Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks for sharing Louis it seems like a lot is withheld about the nature of the relationship. What is all the Armageddon of the relationship all about. Is there divorce in the works. I like the way it flows with no grammar mistakes. Thanks friend for sharing.
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Review of What if...  Open in new Window.
Review by drifter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Enjoyed the way you contrast reality and give definition in the end. I might want to explore what this means for sharing what this means in respect to the writer in ken and the reality he is currently experiencing in therapy setting. Thanks for taking time to share
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Review by drifter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Sarah black Wellsto. I am reminded of the situation comedy ghost. Thanks for taking the characters you make dinner with and turning it into a story we can all relate to. Thank you for the humor. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Have a good day
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Review of What's in a Name?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello riding hood bouti. Thanks for your story. It is a reminder of what we hope to discover what we are looking for in a name. I enjoyed your sense of humor. One name is pu as alluding to picking up garbage. I am glad for your sense of humor. Keep writing.
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