Hello Sarah black Wellsto. I am reminded of the situation comedy ghost. Thanks for taking the characters you make dinner with and turning it into a story we can all relate to. Thank you for the humor. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Have a good day
Hello riding hood bouti. Thanks for your story. It is a reminder of what we hope to discover what we are looking for in a name. I enjoyed your sense of humor. One name is pu as alluding to picking up garbage. I am glad for your sense of humor. Keep writing.
Hello Jacky seems like one of those perfect articles to write because that is what others need. I am glad for the great spirit pervading your article. In the end the irony is that you get help which was a phone call away. Thanks for sharing your article.
Hello Azanya Maslow. Thanks for sharing your documentary on what is happening in Africa these days. There is a vision that calls out to persons.There is always more work to be done. One of the key factors is broken promise which leads to hurt, thanks for stirring awareness.
Hello SeanFhear thanks for your poem on the Red Leaf, the poem speaks about the importance of red in denoting a sense of royalty in the midst of the season. The rhyming and flow are easily readable and one is left pondering the journey of the leaf. O heart of glass,
gentle as is,
red so in tears a mass. Tx for sharing
Thanks SeanFhear, for your beautiful poem about a familiar place avenue fifty one. I enjoyed the spirit of reminiscing memories opening a gate. I also love the opportunity to be invited with others. It is a place that shares of better things to come. Tx for sharing.
Hello Kenzie, thanks for the ongoing challenge you offer to us all. We can no longer sit on our hands. We need courage of our conviction. It is our love for God and country that speaks loudest. Let us continue to be bold! Only in letting go our true passion will the world see for itself
Love the musings wandering thoughts, especially the invitation to envisioning in the context of where the heart and eyes lead. I currently am involved in practicing art. It is easy to see you reaching for templates which can engage the world of the poet. Thanks for sharing.
Hello Green is happy thanks for sharing your thoughts on a beautiful thanksgiving day. I love the way you talk about your various maladies in a cultural context. My brother in law is from Portugal. The picture of the baseball bat puts a smile on my face. Good rhyme and rhythm.
Hello J Cosmic, I love Sam Adams and would like to know more about who he is in this context. I accept you know things that I do not have. Knowing the truth could lead to his deaths the obstacles would make conclusions easier to relate to. Thanks for sharing
Hello Tim, what could be more engaging than a smile. I am glad for the way you arranged your words in ways I can too be with this loving face. RomancingAs the guiding light of Earth’s ungodly seasons
Graces us with its momentous and miraculous displays, is in the air, who could not want her. Thank you for sharing
Thank you Gobbie😀. Enjoyed the fervor and energy running through the prayer. It was like an offering inviting other offerings to connect with God and others in intimate waysI take these fears and illness and offer it to God in union with Jesus. Thanks
Thanks for your beautiful poem Sapphire. I love the title and the way it comes to a pain never goes away.
But neither do the memories
Let's go to the wheel of life,
Let's spin it again,
To fill it with laughter,
Or maybe sometimes pain . It is the circle of life embrace and learn
Hello stargazer. It is easy to get caught up in your description of David. The qualities that set him apart at a soul level. The eyes, the person who could not be looked through. He is clothed in silk. I am glad for the way you arranged the words so I could see a lot with few words
Hello Aceria, thanks for your poem. The title finds consise meanings. From ramped up expecting to acceptance. It is learning to embrace the here and now rather than where it is now. I can only expect you to accept 6pm and as letting integrity rule to
Hello Lou by his grace. The words that grabbed me about your saw mill.The buzzing saws quit snarling and rattling,
spitting out piles of dust and long boards.
The sweet-scented scent wafted free,
Blowing across the hills like memory.
I enjoyed seeing how this place fed you. Tx
Hello hunters moon. I enjoyed your poem a great deal. The world of a glutton who is I could not resist and so I stayed,
a glutton for each word that I would eat so free. And so as like the muse speculate I am looking forward to entering the relationship and getting filled
Hello Broken ring. I am grateful for your vision of a moment in time when healing can take place. My own wife has Alzheimer's. Oh if only for a moment. As you conclude the time to embrace moments is now.
Thanks Joey for your romantic story. I enjoyed the imagery of the Ford even as the main character gets ill in the end. It gave me sense of hope. Relationships are never meant to end. Especially with a nice car to get you to a loved one's place. Tx
Thanks GB Williams for the gift of faith and freedom you offer to soldiers everywhere. I pray that you keep this vision before us all. None of us deserves living if we don't affirm people giving life for us.
Well written as usual Tim. It has a very patriotic flavor to it with words that bespeak glory and honor for persons in the armed forces. Competence is the vision with insightful leadership going forward."planning a timed warranted stay of promise. Tx for sharing
I like the message in the midst of chaos, the least likely can become our friend. I am guessing that all are pups or adult dogs. It is fun to see how they get information and learn to trust each other over time. Some of your letters are seemingly without punctuation unless you meant it that way. Tx
Thanks for honest authentic sharing. It makes it even more fun to share in poetry. I know that for myself nothing is more healing than to put my thoughts on paper. Otherwise I tend to think and worry too much. Thanks about your own testimony. I have noticed that it helps to review others before I trust others to review something I write. Tx
Hello Jacky, I am not sure I understand completely. It appears that a trumpet Vine is talking to someone about the whole idea of identity and then there is a shift that sees someone talking to Dr. White about being a therapist, maybe the person talking to the trumpet vine and along comes Dehlia who he orders two lunches from and for some reason she has his knife. Then we see another character Darren who is hearing the story. I understand that you know what is happening. I would like to be clearer.
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Hello Rhyssa, Fun ride. There is a boy who is a racing car driver at heart . There is nothing that can get in his way. It is more of a game than reality. He gets the high score and then sets the out to do better. I am on the edge of my seat with him a few feet from the finish line and is told he will meet the bus. It put it all in perspective. Thanks for sharing
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