Don't be afraid to break out of the line length-
Making its makr on each
and every day
Those that are mean
Those that are kind
It will give emphasis to these lines as well as create a better flow. I stopped to think which makes more sense/sounds better Making its mark on each day vs. making its mark on every day, or maybe making its mark on each and every day.
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