I really enjoy this writing. I like that you start to create a word. It makes it more interesting and really catches the reader's attention. Something like what you did can be hard to have it make sense, but you did great. I will be reading more of your work! Great job!
I enjoy this writing. It has amazing detail, and that's what makes it great. It describes how everyone feels when they wake up, which makes it relatable. You did great work with this piece. That's pretty hard to do. You deserve more reviews for sure! I will be reading more of your work, great job!
I know this was written a while ago, but I just came across it. I like all the descriptive words. It makes it very interesting. It adds detail, and as if I can see it. You deserve more reviews on this writing piece, great job. I will be reading more.
I literally couldn't stop reading! It's such a great story. The fact that you left it at a cliffhanger makes me want more. I most people hate cliffhangers. However, it works. This had to of taken a long time to write. It deserves more reviews! It is very, very good. Great Job! I will be reading more.
This poem is fabulous! The detail is perfect. It gives the reader a visual of the setting and what is going on. The fact that you make it so smooth to read it hard to do. I hope to be reading more of your work. I'm also excited to see more of the work you put out! You deserve more reviews! Great job!
Wow! this is great. I love the flow of things; it makes the poem much better. How it shortly describes a boy's growth into adulthood is fabulous. I think this is wonderful and needs more good reviews! I also have to say I enjoy the name, 'Little boy odd'. It's different and that's great. I will be reading more of your work. Great Job!
I would have to say this is very great writing. It is sad because the character (which could be you, however, I'm not sure) doesn't want to be better than anyone. I like that it is short and leaves the reader wanting more. The ending is nice as if asking someone to be in a relationship with the character. I would have to say a great job. I will be reading more!
I like that I can feel the emotion in this buddy. It's fantastic even though it is short. I will read all of your stories, of course. I mean, I will probably be forced. Either way, I will enjoy it because you are a great writer. You also write the truth. Great Job! Little buddy you better write more! Lots of love :)
PS: I'm giving you 1,500 points because I love you.
This piece of writing is fantastic. It's so true to everything. How deep this goes is wonderful. I can tell it's very thought out. Great writing like this is hard since most don't know what to say. For you, however, you know exactly what to say. I've never really thought about the afterlife in this manner, and it's quite overwhelming in away. I will be reading more of your work, great job!
This writing is so great. It's simple but to everyone a different meaning. To be completely honest that is a hard task to do. Poems are also the best thing to show feeling, which you did great. It's the best thing to be happy, and sometimes that a hard thing to do. And in this day and age with all the bad surrounding us. I will be reading more of your work. Great job!
I see that this writing is short, at least to the eye. I see all the deep meanings to all of this, at least I hope so. I would have a different meaning for your work compared to you, but it's just ravishing. Short, but just amazing. It feels like a look deep into your soul. I get that might be cheesy, but it's true. I would say I have no other way to describe this. Thank you for writing this. I can't wait to read more.
I just came across this, and it's so intriguing! I love this. It feels so real. The detail is astounding. I know the whole format of how you were writing is supposed to have detail; yes, but it's perfect. I think that this writing should be more well known. I just really wanted to let you know that this writing is great, and you should create more such as this. The fact that it explains the life of an older man is perfect. Although most of the people on this website are younger, it works. It gives teenagers a view on life when they are older. I just want to thank you for writing this! Again, you must write more.
Hi Madeleine,
This story is very intriguing, making me wonder about what the contents of the dream mean. It also inspires me to write a scary story. The detail included in the writing helps paint a picture of what you might have seen. The description of the house may have made the story bland, but it helped; made it better. The descriptions of your companions gave me more of a sense of how you might have felt during the dream. It gave me a sense of fear for you like it was happening right in front of me. Occasionally I felt my heart racing. With the man stabbing you, I could almost feel it. My whole body got a chilly feeling the second I read those words. How you wrote the dream made it even better. Where there is only just one sentence alone, it gives a sense of suspense. It feels like I'm watching a scary movie. I am quite excited to read more of your work, and I will be reviewing more of your amazing work. I haven't looked over your other stories yet. I will be doing that soon, but I can tell you that you would be amazing at writing horror. You can tell a great heart racing scary story, something that most fail to do. I do hope that more people find and read your work. You are doing a great job. Once again I cannot wait to read more of your work. Great job!
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.08 seconds at 11:25am on Dec 22, 2024 via server WEBX1.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
My review has been submitted for consideration in "
