This was incredible. You captured my attention from the beginning (I always love starting a story while it's in the middle of something!). Dialogue was excellent, and there was only one area where I had to 'muddle' through (first shape, second shape, first shape, second shape.... and then you got into descriptions). I draw storyboards for movies and I love it when I can see something while I read it, that's what makes it a good work to me. This is the first of your work that I have read, but I will definitely be reading more!
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