I haven't read Jessica's stories, but plan to read the other stories, if there are others. And I'm not quite sure as to the direction you were taking this is. however, as I read it if I were Jess, I would have been looking for my husband to have said that I am a great mother or things of that nature. Which he never once did so that sucks.
Not only is this a beautiful piece. It hit the spot for me, well emotionally at least. Some people including myself seem to forget that life is a journey, and what all goes in to a journey. It's not just a simple uphill travel in a short amount of time.
I LOVE this!!! Not only is it beneficial for yourself, but it is also very helpful to most if not all that will come across it. My favorite had to be when you said that you can't give away all the secrets like you know something now that the other you doesn't know. Which may as well be the case.
First, this is a lovely piece.
Secondly, she knows and does all these things simply because she is a mother. Be it intelligence or instinct. Either way she was going to figure it out for her babies. How do you think we came to know huts. The history books have it wrong, it was a MOM.
First, this is a great read.
Second,"you have to know a letter is contained within a word, in order to remove it." Can mean so much more than stated in this read to me. Though it ties this together rather well.
Side Note: There are a few typos in this piece.
This was an excellent read. And time well spent. Though I wish I could know what Tree's energy storage idea is in full detail. And I love how Jessica was just so kind to Aaron and Tree about the whole situation. It kind of makes me think about Son In Law. And I love that movie so much! Keep up the good work though!
Ironically enough, I was messing with my own nose ring as I was reading line 10. Making me chuckle a little harder than I should have. However, I liked this read. Though I'm not all that familiar with California Dream it was still a great read. Not to mention, I love mostly all things Vampire.
I LOVE THIS!!!! I work in a call center for FTD.com selling flowers all day, every day. SO to see some one acknowledge Orchids is as rare as they are. They are very beautiful and majestic flowers. But everyone wants the most mainstream flower.... ROSES! Do people ever get tired of always sending and receiving roses?
The title and description made me think that this piece was going to go in a different direction. Nonetheless, I love this piece as it is, it is eloquently put. And unfortunately this is what happens to a lot of people who should have fallen in love with one person or another.
I love everything about this piece. From the description, to the quote to the basis about "Dead Poet Society" I remember watching this movie when I was in high school and though I may not remember a majority of it, it did change a majority of my life and how I look at a lot of things.
I unfortunately don't know who Jose Esteban Munoz is. However, if this is an extract from his work, thanks to you I will no look into him and his art.
As for the expert itself. We are like this until we actually are ghost. This is beautifully put and made me feel better about not knowing where to go and just wondering.
Why does it seem like most people acquire their hero's (or who they look up to) between the ages of 4-6? Is it because we are so impressionable at that age? Or the goodness we see in them, such as you seen perfection in Richard?
I also love the way this made me feel as I read it. As if I were a tween sneaking out of my own home, which I didn't do by the way, making this all the more better.
I love this piece and would love to read more of your writings in the near future.
This poem is a great way to explain the way I feel with my newest love interest. There are just something's that can only be understood at certain points when it comes to love. You have to literally go through a few things to understand another thing. If that makes sense.
I think you are trying to make the whole community of WDC cry with this one. I don't think some people think of this aspect when they have pets and how what happens in there life may affect their furry friends. This was a beautiful piece. keep up the great work.
What thought process did you go through to get these names? Any time I write the story I always have such a hard time coming up with names. I always give them nicknames and base their names off that. And the hardest is choosing a last name and who will be who.
Though I am not all that deep into the world of magic. I really truly appreciated this piece because now I feel like OI know a little more and want to venture into finding which area of magic I prefer. Some say magic is fictional, but either way, I found this piece to be very well written and informative.
I was a little confused as I read expecting something to be mentioned about he bowling center. But then as I read, I began to like it more and more. Though it was about the center, it seems to not be about the center itself, but about what it holds in a meaningful sense. Good piece. Keep up the good work.
What in the world is a clown faery? I have never heard of that type of imp. Though Pik did make it seem as though that was one very delicious pie. Or you rather since you have such good imagery in this piece.
I also love how it has a moral of forgiveness in it. When I began reading I thought it would end with comedy or death. Not forgiveness.
My mom is like that, always saying she's a younger age. But then again, who's mom isn't? And It was a cute way to humble anyone on things that they may find to not be appropriate for them or that they think they deserve more or less of. Nonetheless, it was a good and enjoyable read.
As stated it is an inspirational piece. This is the type of poem that you hang in your hallway and every time your head is hung low while walking past you read it to up lift your spirits and keep you moving through out the day, or maybe even the whole week. Keep up the hard work of inspiring those everywhere!
This is literally what my life currently consists of. Not to say that my current friends hate me, but aside from less than a handful of people (Family and friends) aren't rooting for me the way they should. or the way that old (friends and family) would root for me, and support me nonstop making sure that I continue to push forward.
In regards to be a writer, I have never really agreed with nothing more than I agree with this here and now. This, This is why people write. To get out their truths. To get out their pain. To get out whatever is in that shouldn't be. They leave it on paper as whatever they like though it may not reflect what it was that was on the inside.
Though this piece is simple answers to a simple question, I love how it is put into words that most anyone, including a child, can relate to. Have you done this for any other colors? Nonetheless, this makes me feel at peace and light like air. Keep up the good work.
This is like the third time I've said this today, but the Lord words in mysterious ways. This is a message that I have been trying to continue to repeat to myself on a daily basis. I hope that your journey for peace continues down a loving path. I will say a prayer tonight that it is a serene path.
Though in essence this is all that is important, some do not care to live, but just to have a life and that is why they do all of the things that aren't important per your writing. And some think that the things that they are doing are of the most importance to their lives. But who are we to say what should and shouldn't be important to anyone.
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