" Iceberg " is really interesting to read. It is highly informative and equally beneficial to the readers. It has two parts. The first part gives an intersting desciption of Iceberg and the Titanic ship. The latter part is about meditation and the effect of it in our lives. A very good contribution to the world of literature. 🌹🌹🌹👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏
Pure Imagination is true, but it is wild. As it is wild, it with thoughtful whims and desires kindling for thr fire. The poet imagines the Lady Majesty of the Prince shall kiss her spellbound frog. Though the language used is simple, it is capable of creating a hurricane in our imagination. A good poem. Best wishes. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
The poem"Brushstrokes of Humanity" by the poet RadioShea depicts clearly in simple language, but very effectively how different human beings are engaged in quite different acts in different places. Some acts are cruel, come are pitiful, some are antisocial. Good poem. 🌹🌹👍👍🙏🙏
The poem"I am Sam"by the poe=≠t Fredmom is a really heart touching poem. The pain of the loss of sight and the inner quench to regain the sight is heart rending. Further, the last line"I want to see my mother, just at one glance" shakes the very soul of the reader. An excellent poem🌹🌹🌹👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏
As I understand, the poem"Love beyond the lust" by the poet rl is a love poem of the sun and the earth. The poet says that this world suffers naught of pride or greed, lust or love. But how can it be? This is only my doubt. The poet must have the reason. A little more elaboration is needed. But the writing is good and thought provoking. Go ahead. Best wishes🌹🌹🌹🌹
The poem"Diet Dying Days"by the poet Amy Jo is interesting to read. Food selection is a major problem which we contemporaries face. Which is the apt food to take? We are at a loss to decide before the modern foods. The subject matter of the poem attracts the attention of the teaders. 🌹🙏🌹🌹
The story engenders much laughter and thought in the mind of the readers."Housewife become Fatwife" attracts our attention due to the speciality and peculiarity of the subject matter dealt with in it. I like your story very much. Keep writing on and become a great writer. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
The poem"Mother Nature" by the poet Thewriterwitch is an enchanting poem written on "nature". The style is simple, the language also goes the way. But the charm it envisages is far far high.The mother nature is described as a girl to add a romantic outlook. Excellent poem. Best wishes, dear poet. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
The poem"She walks with Angels"by the poet Redtowrite is a really touching one. The loss of the child is extremely unbearable, but the poet does not fill the lines with lamentations. Instead, the poet consoles that the child is now with angels. A very good poem. 🌹🌹🌹🌹🙏🙏🙏🙏
The poem "Homecoming"by the poet Joto kai is brimming with the pleasure the poet experinces on getting back his lost cat. The style the poem is simple. The vocabulary used is also simple. Dear poet, your poem has a special charm to attract the attention of the readers. Good luck. Keep writing on. 🌹🌹🌹
The poem"Stardust"by the poet Poppy C seems to be a prayer to the Almighty, the all mysterous and the all wonderful God, who has created all the surpirses that we see and feel with our senses. We, the mortals can only stretch our hands above and cry and surrender the wonder. We are mere stardusts. A good poem. I like it. 🌹🌹🌹
A very courageous declaration of essential truths that everybody likes to hear.Not a single point in it can be pointed out as wrong or irrelevant. Man is born free, but he is in chains everywhere in the world. Freedom of speech is power, freedom of justice is power. The poem is an exhortation to realize it. A very good poem. I like it very much. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
Really interesting to read. How minutely you have observed the turtle. No mistake can be detected in your observation. You have a future as a poet. Write on. Best wishes. 🌹🌹🌹
The poem"A prayful balance-power and pride"by the poet Tim Chiu is a highly philosophical poem which well explains his vision of life. It is really true that we are mere shaky mortals making brilliant plans reviving through portals and liking cool scans. A very good poem. 🌹🌹🌹
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